「Android」 RoughVer【En】
Added 2025-01-15 15:00:00 +0000 UTC
(The postscript is a one-shot translation of Deepl.The nuance may have changed slightly.)
Thank you for your support.
I'm Moheji, still in a New Year's funk.
This time, as the title says, it's an android-ized version.
I think the word “android” nowadays reminds me more of a mobile phone.
The plot looked good, but when I tried to make it into a name, it didn't look balanced.
When I rough it out further, I think there's a lot of unnecessary foreshadowing.
But I think it's okay, because it adds depth to the worldview and makes the erotic scenes more exciting.
Next, I will submit a clean version of this at the beginning of next month.
After that, I guess I'll continue with PP2.
See you later.
Comments
Excited to see this finished.
Stem
2025-01-15 15:59:23 +0000 UTC
