Draconian Remnant 20
Added 2020-10-29 19:44:31 +0000 UTCThe Safe Zone isn't so Safe.
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I make sure to tweak it before posting on QQ, I tend to get her name wrong when I'm typing quickly, and, yeah, he does. Glad you liked it!
PublicLee Speaking
2020-10-29 21:38:59 +0000 UTCThe paragraphs are too close, Weiss was called Wiess once or twice, but it looks good other than that. On the chapter itself, WOW, Jaune has some major trust issues. I can get why if what he implied on his backstory is true.
Draconic Hermit
2020-10-29 21:05:05 +0000 UTC
