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Path of the King - Chapter 66 & 67

Hi everyone,

sorry for the long wait. I had issues with the pacing of these two chapters. A few plot points are set down, and the relationship with Rider continues to evolve but it's far from reaching the tipping point.

Have a good read.

Chapter 66 

Chapter 67 

Tomorrow I'll post the result of the poll for the next update.

Comments

Fair criticism, but both the story and the relationships have always been slow burners. I can accept a relationship that forms in the span of fifteen days when lives are on the line, but a harem-ish route need more than that for it be somewhat belieavable.

Neoalfa

Fun update, but it's taking too long for Shirou and Rider's relationship to advance to the next level. I'd have preferred if the focus had stayed on Medea, but if we're going to go with the Shirou/Greek Harem route, might as well go all in and do it properly.

Jonathan Goldman

Don't apologize, it's a crazy time, just good to hear from ya. 😁

Angryhenry


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