Apoleone 2024 - First Page
Added 2024-02-03 05:58:25 +0000 UTCHello my friends. I got a mega cold 🤧. My health is a kind of fragile. Even so I finish this first page of Apoleone. The pages can receive updates, so take the opportunity to suggest an improvement in English if it is needed. 🥳
Comments
oh, i get it now xD
RodrigoH
2024-02-03 20:00:10 +0000 UTCThe 5° frame is looking tottaly wrong. It was my cold drawing in my place.
Winter_Fairy
2024-02-03 14:45:48 +0000 UTCThanks. The rain is a personal joke. When someone call me to go out and I don't want.
Winter_Fairy
2024-02-03 14:31:02 +0000 UTCI love how Olivia is looking so elegant, even speaking french, such a refined and hot lady😍 and the air conditioning and laptop brands are priceless xD
RodrigoH
2024-02-03 07:29:31 +0000 UTCThe comic is looking good, i just noticed one detail in the second text, "to make me hang out" would be more correct😄 Also, is it fine the text "under this rain"? is not supposed to be sunny and hot outside?🤔
RodrigoH
2024-02-03 07:22:29 +0000 UTC
