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Thoughts on Kaylee 19 and the Fairy comic?

Hey, just wondered what people thought. Hopefully you liked this months' comics!

I'm already pretty much decided on the direction that the next chapter of Kaylee will go in, but I am open to feedback about where the next chapter of the fairy comic goes!

Thoughts on Kaylee 19 and the Fairy comic? Thoughts on Kaylee 19 and the Fairy comic?

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So it was small, much like a fairy? It works on so many levels!

Redfiredog

I found the text a bit too small in the fairy comic

omnomplus

I loved the fairy comic! Pls more of it!

There should be a growth chart included with Kaylee 19, unless I'm missing something

Redfiredog

Yh you can't not include the the growth charts those are so hot. How do we know how much the Goddesses have grown and how heavy they are without them.

Union

I thought someone had asked about it and you said it was a render error, but looking back I don’t see that. Never mind 😵‍💫

Dr. Whoopass

mislead how?

Redfiredog

haha sorry

Redfiredog

That’s Not true I was just upset 😭

Dr. Whoopass

OH YEAH WELL I THINK EATING PEOPLE IS BORING SO THERE

Dr. Whoopass

I mostly just think they're boring TBH, and they feel kind of out of place

Redfiredog

oh and I love how you misled us on the fire 🤣

Dr. Whoopass

I liked Kaylee a lot but I missed the slideshow style growth scenes. Was that a casualty of the graphics card problems?

Dr. Whoopass

I liked Kaylee alot. It was one of the weirder chapters as it seemed to be a fifty fifty split between the plot and sex? And by that I mean there's some previous chapters that are almost exclusively Kaylee getting off and others that are more narratively driven. The lesbian scenes were terrific, but I only wish they both did more is all. I'm a fan of butt stuff so if Kaylee had forced Kayla around there during her panicked state of nearly being matched in size I would have loved it! So hopefully we'll get to see more of her ass before the series is out and with that in mind, her ass breaking through a faltline was spectacular. She'll likely not get that big to do that in general as she moves, so it's great you added it in as it really drives home how massive Kaylee is getting. That said I'm still rooting for Kaylee to come out on top and become a mindless sex crazed monster, but it feels as if she'll be defeated given how close Kayla came to nearly surpassing her? With that though, I would love to see Kayla eventually outgrow her briefly only for Kaylee to completely loose it and in turn grow massively larger due to her temper. Having her then realise that her anger is what gives her the edge on her sister in terms of growing could potentially lead to Kaylee angrily masturbating, which, would be unbelievable hot! Her ranting in fury at her body swearing at it to get bigger would just be an amazing sequence. All in all though it was pretty solid start to finish and that ending set up the next chapter perfectly for a hellish type battle/confrontation scene between the two sisters. Next issue hopefully Kaylee goes full on power crazed and starts telling Kayla how big she REALLY has thought of getting! I know by the series end she'll not be AS BIG as she's imagined, but I'd really love to see Kayla's reaction if Kaylee were to say that she's eventually going shove the Earth up her ass like Kayla worried about in Part 16 and has decided that Kayla will be her dildo forever like she thought of by this chapters end. They've thought/worried of all this granted, but to have Kayla hear it outload and have her reaction would be amazing! Favourite panels were; 78, Just the composition. Kaylees agape mouth as she grabs her tit, and how fat her ass looks as she shoves Kayla into her pussy. Fantastic! 162, Kaylee's wish for complete superiority and worship as she shoves her sisters face into her pussy was amazing. 187, Just her face gave me fucking chills. Just that wide eyed look of pure megalomania. I can just picture her reaching out for the Earth as she looms before it with the same mad expression! 197, Just that ASS. She's damn right it's heating up! 223, I don't know if you incrementally make Kaylee slightly thiccer spurt to spurt. But the cellulite is starting to build I think, and I love it!

Hew Draper

I 100% agree about Mason being too mad for too long, that was just something that wasn't really clear until the editing process, and by then it was too late. "It would be nice if there were a comic where the male character would be totally into it. Experiencing power by proxy through a giantess." You know, the reason I haven't really done with a guy is that every time I almost did, I decided it would be hotter to have the the 'giantess by proxy' character be a woman."

Redfiredog

I loved the art in both comics. I could do without the sisterly love, but not withstanding that, Kaylee is a good comic. But I agree with others that Kaylee is running towards its end. How big can Kaylee get before she can't interact with the people? Ruling is a fun, but ruling without subjects not so much. I loved the fairy comic. Shea was very nice to look at. I also think that the protests of Mason went on a bit too long. It would be nice if there were a comic where the male character would be totally into it. Experiencing power by proxy through a giantess.

Goingsomewhere

I loved Kaylee, the sisters scene together was awesome, I hope Krystal grows next chapter maybe use Anna as a sex toy. Shae was good too, maybe next chapter make her demolish the policy station and maybe add a spell book/wizard to spice the story somemore

John

Yeah I'm taking a whole lot of liberties with fairy lore. I admit I did zero research, most it's it's just stuff I remember from reading Neil Gaiman stories and watching Jonathan Strange years ago

Redfiredog

I LOVE Shae, only thing that would make it better was more sexy time with her. HELL she is probably big enough to use a building now, with or without him inside of it. But aside from that the pacing, the character herself, I really do like it. Where it goes now... THAT will be the question!

Unknown1

Kayla looked really amazing the art was wonderful and almost had the titular character facing some challenge. Hopefully there are some actual twists for her coming up. Fairy had fun art but felt more like a genie from the lamp story than a fairy story. There was a bit of her starting out small and growing, but not much one of the fun things about fairy stories is the fairy developing size from whatever method but starting off helpless, instead of being god tier right away. Still a very fun story.

MistressofTransformation

Haha yeah I 100% agree. Sometimes it's hard to get a feel for pacing until after it's finished, but in retrospect that went on for way too long. He should have stopped freaking out about it after the sex scene. In part 2 he'll still try to keep her under control, but it will be less hysterical and more like the dynamic in OAG. That, I think was the problem; not that he's trying to keep her from unleashing her (his?) id, but that he's so over-the-top about it, instead of trying to bargain with her.

Redfiredog

Think that Shae is off to a good start. The vore scenes were good. Was surprised Mason complained so much about having this hot fairy girl who wants him so much and can make his life more interesting... The artwork was excellent. I really liked the different outfits she was able to manifest for herself. I feel like Kaylee is also just lacking. Sure, her dramatic increase in size that she could damage the Earth was hot and exciting but there just needs to be an end soon for me. Kayla is hot but just seems so clueless to me. The lighting and shadow from the sun, clouds, and lava were excellently done. Really made the image match the story words.

tall_ollie

Boo that's what makes it good

Union

If I I have to sit through another part with Mason complaining for 100+ pages only for Shae to do the opposite - I’m gonna lose it. The anime intro was unexpected and funny. Enjoyed that and Shae’s model is beautiful.

Shatrr


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