Sorry about the link issues!

Appreciate you taking my critiquing well. And yeah it's just my opinion, I've really enjoyed the story overall.

It was always going to end up as an escalating battle between Kaylee and Kayla, with that taking center-stage after I felt like I'd exhausted most of the possibilities of Kaylee rampaging around. So that isn't bloat, I'm pretty much sticking to the concept I had since the inception of the series. The stuff with Anna and Yeona growing wasn't as planned out, but it's been a pretty small part of the story. And while the other people who grew weren't directly exposed to the "tanning bed," they were exposed to Kaylee. I figured that it worked like a kind of radiation, with people who spent time nearby being exposed to the radiation, and some people being more susceptible than others. Anyway, I'm sorry that you don't like the more recent chapters as much, but I can't please everyone. The story from here on out is very much going to be about the sisters fighting with each other, so consider yourself warned.

Redfiredog

Yup definitely just my opinion. Like I said I am probably in the minority.

Not to be rude, but that's just your opinion; I think it isn't fair to say that Kaylee was a waste of potential, we all like and dislike different things, I for example really dislike Jewelry (Kosmemophobia) and it really is a deal breaker for me in any story (or IRL tbf) and even though I really dislike it I would never say a story is a waste of potential or bad just because GTS characters are wearing jewelry etc, even if that wouldnt make any sense story wise. You just don't like the direction it is taking and that's okay. PS. I think the psychological aspect is one of the best things of Kaylee. On one end we have Kaylee who is a dumb narcissistic girl that doesn't care for anyone other than her family, and on the other we have Kayla who is having a mental battle with her morality and impulses actually trying to be a good person. I think RFDG really is nailing the psychological aspect of Kaylee.

BigMiku

Maybe I'm in the minority here but it's pretty hard to see a story that started out with so much promise, like Kaylee, just start to meander and lose its way. Having the narrative centered around Kaylee, her life before, and her gradual rise to power was so great. Now we have what, like 3 or 4 other people randomly growing even though Kaylee was the only one exposed to her father's machine, and in the most recent chapter it's devolved into nothing more than a loosely narrated vorefest between her and her sister. For me, what really does it with giantess stories is the psychological aspect. The tables turning, the power, the corruption, the revenge. This story had a lot of that at the beginning, but it has really lost its punch in recent chapters. Maybe taking a break on it was a good idea.