Kaylee retouching comparison

Page 195, "maybe I should go back to see what Kayla's up to?"

A little bit

Redfiredog

Personally I absolutely loved an all Kaylee comic. I get why the Krystal and Kayla stuff is there storywise but I mostly just quickly skim over those parts lol. Also I feel like it’s safe to say that the army wouldn’t just give up until they absolutely have no other option

Zachary P (rabidsquirrel44)

Was she breaking the 4th wall in the beginning of the chapter when she was talking about feeling anew ?

John Alamo

I like the retouching, it is brighter, clearer and has more contrast so you can see the awesome detail even more. I just love the relaxed Kaylee just casually strolling around, carelessly stepping on all in her path........and she looks round down the panicky street, almost matter-of-factly, and then you can see her facial expression about to change as she then decides to "follow" the crowd. I am not in high enough a tier to have seen the full Kaylee 14 yet but it looks awesome what I have seen.

She still thinks Kayla is dead. Is there something to the contrary?

Redfiredog

I enjoyed the looks into Kaylee's thought processes around being effectively unstoppable, but I was confused near the end. Is she still under the impression Kayla's dead, or was that meant to be written in later?

I get what you're saying, and originally I was planning on intercutting Kaylee's scenes with Kayla and Anna, but I wanted to have a chapter where I was really focused on having as much destruction as possible... and it is a porn comic, so I think it's okay to be totally gratuitous and not plot-focused now and again. And at the scale Kaylee is at, even the simplest interactions with normal people become very difficult, both on my end and for the character. I've been wanting to do a jet fight sequence in a comic for a while, and I really wanted to see how far I could push large-scale destruction sequences in DAZ. Next chapter will have more story progression, and should have way more of Kayla and Anna!

Redfiredog

I read the chapter and i was a bit disappointed. i think it's mainy too points: 1. It's not on the same story level as the previous chapters, the scenes felt repetitve for me since there was'nt any interaction between kaylee and other characters, also she already fought the army with the tanks so why dedicate most of the chapter for it, felt too much. 2. Kaylee's monologues felt overboard, with no interactions kaylee was left mainly to her thoughts and it got pretty boring after the first half i lost interest. IMO this chapter direly needs some interesting counter for kaylee, i really hoped to see more of krystal or kayla since they add a lot to the plot. i did like the destruction and new art style very much, it's just the plot needs to be interesting as well

John