Thoughts on Kaylee 12 and DS3?

I liked seeing Kaylee's destruction via the news reporting, it gives an interesting dimension to the descrutction. Also liked DS3 though a few more scenes of Alma together with Nadia would've been cool.

dtchdude

I liked it for the most part. I'm glad Kayla is coming back into the story as there in lies the motivation for Kaylees anger to re-ignite; hopefully resulting in explosive growth!!! It has been mentioned but the story has shifted from Kaylee herself. While I do enjoy seeing the city plunged into chaos and how people react to her, I feel, because of the drastic shift in perspective, it felt more like a side issue of sorts. It was still a great read nevertheless. But one thing I am sort of put out by was the lack of dialogue on Kaylees part. I really expected to see some wraunchy ass oneliners as she destroyed the news station and grabbed the news copter. I am however very pleased to see she is entirely enthralled in her growth and pleasure now, as Kayla narrates, "More growth ment more power, and more power ment more everthing" That really put across the idea that Kaylees goal is to rule the world!

Hew Draper

Cool I love what your doing just had to get my thoughts out there

D Rozco

I get what you mean, but... the story is shifting focus and it's not just going to be about Kaylee from here on out. I'll try to fit some Kaylee viewpoints in the next chapter but Kayla is going to be the main viewpoint character for the next chapter.

Redfiredog

I'm sorry, but I'm upset. Kaylee's POV has already been cut in several parts. And here she is just simply present. The magic of Kaylee herself is lost. I repeat myself, but the story does not praise her thoughts and conversations. Hopefully in the next part, Godess Kaylee will return to the main role. Once again, sorry for my negativity, but I was so waiting for the continuation, but only got spin-off. And sorry for the bad english. I hope I will be heard DS 3 Good by the way.

It was interesting to watch Kayla, and to look at the situation from the side of reporters. But I really miss the thoughts of Kylee herself. Her point of view is much more fun. Is Emma Gear writing the story now? I think it was better before, I mean the storytelling.

I liked this chapter, but i do wish kayla will grow more and inevitably kill some more bystanders hope she gives in to her hunger and we will see some vore scenes. Also in regards to the news anchor i want to see kaylee give a speech to the camera. Im curious about Krystal, she stayed at the bunker i hope she escapes after they make her mad. Personally Kaylee is plenty big now so i hope she stays at her current size or shrinks a bit, i liked her best when she was about 500ft so if the bunker finds an unstable way to shrink kaylee i think it would be great for adding more conflict to the battle field

John

Loved the fact that while Nadia was doing her own thing, her gigantic sister, Alma, was also doing her own thing.

Shatrr

who says she has a boyfriend?

Redfiredog

I like where you are going with Kayla it'd be nice to see a gentle giantess scene with her bf or something before she gets too big. Maybe he can help her grow faster to catch up? Just throwing out ideas

D Rozco

Thanks, glad you liked them so much! I plan to have more vore scenes in Diplomacy Sucks.

Redfiredog

Thanks! And don't worry, I plan to include more of the reporter...

Redfiredog

Loved Kaylee 12. Great POV perspective from the ground. I really like Kayla and how she is trying not to be like her sister. I hope she grows faster to catch up to Kaylee and the government found a way to stop Kaylee growing and shrink her down as Kayla grows.

joe

I liked very much DS3, I also think that is the best chapter so far, and the previews about Titania 6 are also very promising😉😉👍👍👏👏

DS3 did not disappoint, loving the series so far. I haven't read Kaylee yet

Jack

I loved Kaylee 12. Seeing more of Kaylee from the perspective of the news station was a great difference and the fact that we see Kayla coming outside into the city makes me look forward to the next chapter. The designs were also supurb and the stomach perspective was gruesome but great as well since we've never really seen that before. I wonder if we will see what happens the lady reporter in the end. With DP3, this maybe was the best chapter so far considering we now seen Nadia grow much larger but not too large where she cant really interact with the denizens of people she comes across. Also, the vore scene we amazing and detailed. You all outdid yourselves with the facial expressions. Definietly looking forward to the DP4 in the mall and her growing larger. (the conflict with her sister also shows that harming even her own family isn't out of the question) Great work!!!!

I really loved the news reporting aspect but I do wish it cut to Kaylee’s perspective sometimes, especially with the helicopter. Would’ve loved to have seen it and the tiny woman actually in her mouth before she swallowed it. But I know the purpose of this chapter was to focus on Kayla’s perspective. Loved the internal shots tho! Really hope we see more of what happens to the lady reporter at the end as well 😁

Zachary P (rabidsquirrel44)