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Wot U Think? Vixen 4 (Spoilers!)

Warning: Spoilers for Vixen 4 below. 


So it's been a few days since Vixen 4 was sent out, I'm wondering what your reaction was. The first half was a pretty typical evil giantess/growth comic, the second half... less so. I wanted to talk about what was going on there and why I decided to do things how I did, which I'll go into below. (There will be spoilers; If you haven't read Vixen 4, you should probably stop reading now.)

So all the way back in the beginning of Vixen 1, an ancient being was released from an ankh, and took over the body of Emily. That was sort of glossed over for most of parts 2 and 3, so in part 4 I decided I wanted to re-introduce that element back into the story.

This whole time Emily has been a prisoner in her own mind, semi-conscious unable to control her body. The entity that inhabited her body couldn't get rid of Emily's mind/soul, at least not easily, so it pushed it aside. In the second half of Vixen 4, I wanted to show that state. Emily is in a place that's a kind of semi-corporeal realization of their psychological states.  She's stuck watching what's essentially a movie of everything the entity is making her do, powerless to stop it.

Emily manages to momentarily take control of her body before quickly losing it. The entity takes her assertiveness as a threat, and gets hostile; while it had just pushed her aside previously, it's not actively fighting to take over Emily's mind. And that's when things start to get weird. The entity tries to overwhelm Emily, essentially burrowing into her mind overwhelm her mental faculties, forcing her into submission. This is shown from Emily's POV, so we see a series of oddities and intentional "glitches," culminating in a few surreal pages that are black except for distorted text and creepy yellow eyes. Then, Emily frees herself, and wakes up in the realm where she was kept prisoner, an endless void above a glassy "sea of stars," where ghost-like souls wander.

The idea, and look of the area was inspired by a number of different things. Among them: Get Out's The Sunken Place, Under the Skin's horrifying void-like processing chamber, and the Astral Plane from FX's Legion. The surreal, text-heavy section where Emily fights the entity's influence was a last-minute addition that I put together over several hours. Most of the weird pictures are heavily photoshopped versions of images from earlier chapters of the comic (and one image that won't appear until next chapter!) That section cribbed VERY heavily from Neil Gaiman's brilliant comic series The Sandman, which also had a lot of surreal dream battles conveyed through avant-gard combinations of surreal images and text.

Here's one example (top part is probably the most direct inspiration)
And another.  And another. (God I love The Sandman! Seriously, go out and read it if you get a chance.)

So yeah, sandwiched in the middle of a fairly normal giantess comic was a fairly surreal dream sequence. Hopefully it made sense, and hopefully everyone enjoyed the comic as a whole!

Wot U Think? Vixen 4 (Spoilers!)

Comments

Sent a PM to you, thanks!

Redfiredog

I had missed the window to donate in time to receive this months comic batch. I had tried to send you the tier I wanted through PayPal ($20) on the 10th after I got back into town. I was wondering if it actually went through on your end.

Kaltorek

I'm of two minds about the growth here too. I thought the growth itself was well done and really enjoyed it, but I also see where you're coming from with the growth not corresponding to the trigger in this instance.

I can send you an alternate link, but can you tell me what browser you used?

Redfiredog

I'm having the same problem I can't scroll all the way down

Did you try the first of the two links you should have recieved? Despite the outdated description, it includes all the new comics. A few people weren't able to scroll all the way down to Vixen however, did you have the same issue? I'll send a direct link via PM.

Redfiredog

Part 4 was great, lets see what Part 5 will bring. Goddess on a City Rampage? xD

Racer-001

I never received it in the patron links idk why plz help. :/

I liked the background story (and effects) but honestly, I was a little surprised that the goddess creature, despite devouring all the souls thus far, was struggling to fight and control Emily while being so powerful. I also was surprised that she grew so much after only eating the one man. The text effects were good and thought they depicted the struggle well. I do hope there is a lot more vore in the next episode since Emily is quite huge now. Keep up the good work though and this is still my favorite story!

tall_ollie

I can agree partially to the angle of the growth thing. Altough you don't see that much, it is something new and refreshing for a change. Seeing that even buildings aren't enough to stop her growth. There will be plenty of more growth scenes with normal angle in the future :)

Dream-A

Loved the story, loved the text effects. The growth scene kind of sucked tho, because of the angle. Sandman and Legion rule \m/

Dr. Whoopass

I only heard of some of those movies and never watched one, so can’t say much about the similarities. But I was genuinely surprised, in a good way. Since I am really into evil giantess with all their aspects like domination, goddess-complex, arrogant behaviour and so on; I really enjoyed that. The whole psychological part is often ignored in comics or stories, that’s why I loved this so much. Not only does this help in a narrative way, to show more of the reason behind the giantess action (even if it is something trivial like absolute power) , it also greatly helps in emphasizing the dominating and evil personality and shows the victim how insignificant it is. Granted Emily resisted pretty well in the story, I don’t think it will last judging by the last scenes :D. In any case I really enjoyed that part very much. Thank you for that and looking forward to new chapters in the future!

Dream-A


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