I've been working on this for WAY too long! Sorry for the long wait, everyone!
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wow that's a really nice compliment, thank you :) I'm always concerned about my layouts and I'm glad I can create really good buildup
Vivoindigo
2018-08-07 09:23:00 +0000 UTC
That was amazing ππ¦ALSO your panel layouts are that of a mf pro! Iβve never read an erotic comic that has the same build up and payoff as yours. π
2018-08-01 18:28:09 +0000 UTC
Oh... my gosh. Girl, I have to tel you, I was so awestruck and emotional with this that by the time I reached the end, I was teary-eyed. Literally. I had to actually wipe a tear from my eye! This whole thing was beautiful. ;w; It's amazing!! Their facial expressions, their movements, and just how you can absolutely guess what they're saying even with the lack of dialogue. :D SO much emotion!! It's incredibly sexy, but so loving and tender all at once. I just LIVE for that and it's beautifully done here! ;w;
My gosh, I don't even know where to start! There's SO much to say!! Their position at the beginning is interesting, with Eddy stroking Edd and getting him off... Oh, then Edd leaping into action to return the favour, yes!! What a sweetie. His nervousness about giving fellatio was cute, as well as understandable. And Eddy's responses, from his excitement (d'aww, lol) to his sternness, and encouragement... just awesome.
Then they get right into it and oh my gosh, what a ride! I love how Edd gets increasingly more into it, Eddy's pleasured responses are wonderful, and everything in between! The tenderness... And that kissy at the end! AWWW!!
I just love it all!!! Awesome work! ^w^ Plus, the timing was impeccable, because I just got finished writing something sexy a while ago. >w>