The Great Rewritening: Chapter 2 Feedback Request
Added 2022-02-10 02:07:19 +0000 UTCChapter 2 is going to have a lot more story changes in it than Chapter 1, as I've written a new yet crucial scene that foreshadows a lot of what's to come and delves into the motivations of certain characters (while also providing a lore drop about Unity's founding). This new scene is one of the big reasons I needed to do the rewrite, in fact.
Because of all the new material, Chapter 2 will end up being separated into Chapters 2 and 3, with the previous Chapter 3 becoming 4. We'll see!
If you have suggestions or opinions on what Chapter 2 can do better (alternative methods to win Rosy's assignment, perhaps?), I'd love to hear them!
There are 3 ways to provide feedback:
1) Leave a comment on this post,
2) Use the Great Rewritening Feedback channel via the Sanctum of Spoilers,
or
3) Send an email to mindblindbetatest@gmail.com.
