The Red Cat's Adventure CH.4 (Sketch)
Added 2022-12-01 09:17:00 +0000 UTCThis chapter has way more text than the previous one, and it makes me realize that coming up with good enough dialogues is harder than I thought... And I have to come up with a good framing of characters during these conversations too!
I think right now the framing is a bit plain and repetitive. So I may adjust some of them during lineart if I can think of a better framing that is π
Comments
Thank you so much for looking forward to my comic ^^ I'll do my best!
Tostantan
2022-12-10 04:46:41 +0000 UTCIt really is π I'm glad I make my comic only 4 pages...
Tostantan
2022-12-10 04:44:16 +0000 UTCOoooo, this is fun to see, you working on this comic more!~π I look forward to these two interacting together, perhaps the young apprentice coming to terms with she desperately needs some training~π
Jeshthalion
2022-12-02 11:39:19 +0000 UTCDialogue can be hard to write, but it's also really fun! βΊοΈ I'm excited to see this next chapter and how Dog Girl plays into it!
Peter Varnicrast
2022-12-01 14:43:18 +0000 UTC
