Progress Update ✍🏽
Added 2024-11-04 19:29:02 +0000 UTCI'm happy with some of the rewrites so far. I'm going to continue revising the old chapters and adding new scenes until Nov 10. Then I will stop to work on new scenes in Chapt 11 and 12.
This link has no saves, it's just to give you a glimpse of the changes I made so far up to chapter one. I'll add saves on the next update. 💕
Comments
I don't think I'd ever seen that picture of Fiffer before, so maybe that's why
Bonnie Callahan
2024-11-05 17:19:00 +0000 UTCExcuse me? Bessie, I always appreciate your comments, but this one I'm confused. When have I ever bullied my characters? And what in this rewrite is showing that I'm doing that to Brenda? I've explained this before and I need to add options for MC who doesn't want to be friends with Brenda options that are there for all the other characters.
Carmelle Charles Hill
2024-11-05 12:19:36 +0000 UTCIt's been there since forever. I can't belive you're only noticing just now. Lol
Carmelle Charles Hill
2024-11-05 12:15:23 +0000 UTCUgh. I would be excited for this, but i know it's just gonna contain horrible, awful bullying if poor sweet innocent Brenda, whose only crime is doing one well intentioned yet misguided thing and being fat and unattractive. Ugh. This has killed quite a bit of excitement for Lemons, not going to lie. I can't believe you were seduced into this. 😮💨😒🙄
Bessie Burnet
2024-11-05 10:11:24 +0000 UTCI see that F❤️MC 🥹
Bonnie Callahan
2024-11-05 02:41:00 +0000 UTCSo, the whole story, from the process of carrying out the Barlow project, the drama with the other parent, the child's birthday and the very responsible intimacy at the hotel... all of this happened in 3 years??? Excuse my stupidity... lol
Sophia Maria
2024-11-04 21:49:05 +0000 UTCThe three years are the time MC spent in Lemon. The game starts 3 years later and goes back to 3 years ago when the kid was 6. So MC and the kid moved to Lemon when the kid was 6. And now they are leaving Lemon 3 years later. That's what the prologue means.
Carmelle Charles Hill
2024-11-04 21:43:27 +0000 UTC7 yrs, 10-11yrs*
Sophia Maria
2024-11-04 21:03:49 +0000 UTCWill there be a 3 year time jump since MC moved to Lemon City? Just to see if I understand, the child who was previously 8 years old is currently 11-12 years old?
Sophia Maria
2024-11-04 21:02:02 +0000 UTC
