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NSFW Tier - The Contemplative Man 24/41

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If any comic requires internal shots, it's an omegaverse comic, but I still avoided it haha... But it's hard to convey what's happening very well haha....

Also with no balls I know Will's jizz should probably be clear but heyy

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Content warnings (contains spoilers): omegaverse, alphaHannibal/omegaWill, dark content (canon level), heat sex, self lubrication/knots, animalistic behavior, anal sex, rough sex, lying/false pretenses, mention of rape (no rape happens or has happened though), blink-and-you'd-miss-it mpreg (text only, not visual), miscarriage from trauma, the trauma is hannibal's fault, canon events of violence, canon events of gore, bonding, hannibal loves will, will is conflicted, angst, bad end (there will be a part 2)

NSFW Tier - The Contemplative Man 24/41

Comments

I think I'm in love with the last pannel, and with Hannibal's languid eyes &lt;3 (and don't worry about the jizz, it's fake biology to begin with, it doesn't have to be 100% accurate :3c)

So so so so so so so hot, I love Hannibal's face.

So very wonderful. The expressions slay

I think it's better without the internal shot. That's just...not how I see you doing porn. More about the surface stuff if you ask me and I adore it like that. Anyway: I'll bet Hannibal's been waiting a long ass time to taste will's cum. 😏

Megan Noone

Thanks so much! I'll keep this in mind next time I'm tempted to put one in haha~

Reapersun

Thanks :) I agree, I really only see it in very raunchy hentai, and it's usually kind of gross, and not in the good way :P I'm discovering a lot of difficulties in drawing porn vs writing porn, like in writing you can describe something that's happening that isn't visual, but in a comic it's super difficult to convey it. It's part of the fun of drawing this, figuring out ways to solve these problems and what I could do better next time, but yeah, I'm not 100% confident about it lol~

Reapersun

And that last look on Hanni's face~ makes me shudder~

My insides did a little flip flop when I read these last pages~ sooooo goos~ :3

I have to agree with Lova. I'm glad there's no internal shot. I always feel like it reduces the act to just its vulgar mechanics. The characters cease to be people and become bodies and that, to me, takes away from the emotional aspect. And the emotional aspect is something I think you really excel at depicting. You draw the most incredibly expressive faces, and these last few pages haven't disappointed in the least.

Mmmm those blown out pupils...

Lindsey

Those pages of mating makes me want to reread some hannigram omegaverse! Seeing it in action makes it all the more better to imagine the act in the fics.

Tempestt Parham

Personally I'm grateful you didn't draw an internal shot. It often brings me out of a story and honestly I find it can often feel insensitive, perverse or tasteless. While it can make things clearer I feel like you've shown more than enough for someone who knows the basics of omegaverse to perfectly understand what is happening. You're not in any way obligated to explain every detail about how omegaverse works in the comic itself. (Like Will not having testicles due to being an omega, it would be weird and out of place to mention in the comic itself.) By the way, the last couple of pages have been absolutely magical and I love you more with every one. &lt;3 Also, I don't think I've ever loved a sfx as much as that tiny adorable "tug".

Lova | Hachiseiko

*passes out*

Oh man okay so... In canine anatomy, the penis enters before becoming erect (there's a bone in it to assist with this) and only becomes erect upon ejaculation, which causes the knot, the swollen part at the base of the penis, to swell and lock the two participants together. The translation to human anatomy is that it's sort of a second stage erection, where there's still a normal human erection (no bone!), but then the base swells on ejaculation. In fics, the alpha then comes several times while they're stuck together. I really should have bit the bullet and done internal shots for this lol XD

Reapersun

So question for a noobie, what exactly IS going on inside? I've been looking around online at wiki pages and stuff but I can't quite find a clear answer :0

Nobody told me how to deal with awesome art like this - I need a moment or two (wow)


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