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Added 2020-08-27 13:40:44 +0000 UTCJust wrote these. Nothing's been printed yet. As you can probably guess, these were originally Clarissa's that I rejected. However, I've written a new storyline for them as a different character. I think I may adapt elements of the storyline into future Carrington Curse pieces. For now, I'd like thoughts, suggestions. Also, please let me know any mistakes you might see.
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I really like this storyline, I think is very promising!
Ella Cherry
2020-08-28 01:35:54 +0000 UTCI like the idea! If you're adapting elements of this into the Carrington Curse story line what do you think of the protagonist of these pieces and the protagonist of the Carrington Curse both being forced to go to the same finishing school for ladies, as their upper crust families think, based on how they are behaving and speaking, they have had a mental break and need to be retrained as proper little ladies. While the school is able to break them and make them into the upper class feminine ideal it doesn't change their sexuality or attraction to other women and they fall for each other.
Ken
2020-08-27 19:07:59 +0000 UTC
