Update (16/2/24)
Added 2024-02-16 03:07:33 +0000 UTCJust over 5000 words, 11 1/2 pages, written today on Visitor 1.
85% of the way through the build-up now. About to write the 'big' changing event that changes the flirting into her wanting him and leading to the sex scene.
Still got a way to go, but boy is this build-up fun (for me! - I hope you all enjoy it. It is long, slow, and somewhat repetitive in a way, but it has to be to accomplish what I'm aiming at).
The story is on page 112 of Word. Perils' build-up was 116 pages. I still have a decent amount to write before the sex scene so I can confidently say this build-up will be longer than Perils' by a number of pages. (Though the sex scene will be less long, detailed, and repetitive than Perils' was - the latter was meant to be that way, but this one will be a decent size, more varied, and quicker paced. I hope.)
I am excited to get this out to you all asap!
~Shadow~
