Update (13/2/24)
Added 2024-02-13 10:51:34 +0000 UTC1015 words, 2 1/2 pages, written on Visitor 1 today.
I am now about 70% of the way through the build-up. It is at 96 pages so far. Perils' build-up was 116 pages, and I still have a bit to go on Visitor's so it look like this build-up will be longer than Perils' one was.
It needs to be because this story is about how Melody and Lincoln's flirting slowly changes how Melody is and leads to her cheating. That means it is long, detailed, and slow by necessity. The sex scene (from what I have in my head, though it isn't planned out) will not be as long or as detailed as Perils' one. But it will be varied and still a decent size. I am looking forward to getting it written now.
Anyway, just thought you'd all like an update as it has been a while. I may write some more later on today as the day is still young. We'll see if I am in the mood. Whatever happens I am getting close to 80% now so I'll update again when I get there.
I can't wait to get this story out to you all to see what you think!
~Shadow~
Comments
That would ruin the story for when it is released. But there will be another teaser when the story is submitted to Lit.
2024-02-13 18:40:28 +0000 UTCWould you consider posting the entirety of the build up when finished for us loyal patrons and to sustain us until the finished story?
Fergus Rauf
2024-02-13 18:32:29 +0000 UTC