Update (25/9/2023)
Added 2023-09-25 04:14:05 +0000 UTC2360 words, 5 1/2 pages, written today on Visitor.
I've had no time to write with looking for a second job (if you're on Twitter you know why), but today I had free time. And I'm determined to find more free time in the future.
This story looks like it's going to be HUGE. I am on page 25 (in Word) and I am about 15% of the way through the build-up. I am still on the first day of the story and there are more days to come. Basically the story is split up into five flirting sessions, each with different things that happen and so on. I am still on the first and this one has taken over 12,000 words so far and I'm not even finished with it. I still have at least another 8-10 pages to go on it, maybe more.
I'm really enjoying the subtleness to the build-up so far and how long it takes. It reminds me of HP and Perils.
This is a different way to get her to cheat - focused on increasingly flirting with the visitor (hence the name). She is still a good girl who cheats, but it is more subtle a build-up than normal.
I hope you will like it. Can't wait to get it out there for you all.
~Shadow~
