Update (16/8/22)
Added 2022-08-16 08:51:42 +0000 UTC13 pages, 5250 words, written today!
I wrote like the wind and was inspired today, so I have finished the first draft of the story!
I am on to editing it now, and I will be doing a little bit of that today and over the coming days as it is a long story.
I changed the second sex scene into a short montage as I wasn't happy with it being so close to the first scene. The first scene is long and having just about 400-500 words between that and another sex scene was just too much and would have involved too much repetition given that they were still in the same place and had just had sex. So the montage works better.
The story WILL be submitted to Literotica before the beginning of September, maybe in just a few days depending on how well the editing goes. So I will post to let you know when and post a 15 page teaser for you Patrons to read.
I'm feeling good about this and looking forward to the editing. We'll see if we add any more to anything. The story is currently 127 pages in Word (that's about 21 pages on Lit roughly) and stands at 47650 words. So I hope you'll enjoy it.
Keep being naughty out there. It's time to edit!
~Shadow~
Comments
Can't wait!
BNR
2022-08-17 18:16:23 +0000 UTCThat is what I thought with the montage. I wanted the sex to happen but I didn't want to repeat everything that had just happened. I hope you will like it. I have done my best with this story.
2022-08-17 10:21:32 +0000 UTCCongrats, can't wait to read it ! Must be one of your longest story (excluding Perils), so since I already like the dynamic between the characters I'm pretty sure it will become one (if not my) favorite ! Nice call for the second sex scene imo, doesn't need to write a whole new scene if the settings didn't change that much. And I love the montages in your stories anyway (like in Perils where it must be one of my favorite part of the story, especially when they fuck over the sleepyhead ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°), or in The Bride's First Dance when she spend the night at the best man place), it's a nice way to show more diverses situations after an already big scene.
My Love Is Your Love
2022-08-17 05:05:14 +0000 UTC
