Update (13/1/22)
Added 2022-01-13 16:51:41 +0000 UTCFinished the 'intro' part of the story now. On to the build up proper next.
2000 words, 4 pages, written so far today. Hoping to have more time to write the first part of the build up if I can today.
Looking forward to getting into the swing of the build up on this one. Short version, this build up takes place over a week rather than a day at first, at least the intro and initial build up do. Then the main build up takes place during a day. Not my usual writing style so I am trying something new and not enjoying it. But I will once I get to the build up proper.
Here's hoping I get more time to write today!
~Shadow~
Comments
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BNR
2022-01-30 22:19:48 +0000 UTCHow did you get to read it?
S Jacobs
2022-01-30 19:04:19 +0000 UTCGlad you enjoyed it :)
2022-01-17 15:01:33 +0000 UTCI'm glad you like them! Many more to come. Just need the time and energy to write them, but they're on their way!
2022-01-17 15:01:05 +0000 UTCThanks for the updates!Just wanted to say that I am absolutely looking forward to all your future work. Huge fan of your cheating stories. They hit every note (build up, actual scenes, and aftermath) in the perfect way.
2022-01-16 10:57:32 +0000 UTCI enjoyed how it started from that first kiss. The tickling then the kiss . Then to have her in full white shower mode was genius!
BNR
2022-01-14 15:16:20 +0000 UTCThat is an interesting idea. But it would be a different story. Newlywed was meant to centre around the tickling/blowjob scene being spontaneous so it couldn't really have a slow burn. For another story that would work though.
2022-01-14 13:54:47 +0000 UTCAwesome! Thinking about one of my favorite stories (Decorating the Newlywed) I can't help but think how much more I might enjoy it if the story were more slow burn. Maybe some light flirting first. They could sneak some kissing first. Then you play "just the tip!" =P
BNR
2022-01-14 09:09:01 +0000 UTC
