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Story - The Distraction PDF

As promised here is the PDF version of the new story, The Distraction, for those of you who want to enjoy without clicking through pages on Lit.

Enjoy!

~Shadow~

Comments

I'm glad you enjoyed it. The end I wasn't too happy with but it felt right. As for the rest, it was just a hard story to write so I guess I don't see it from the readers' perspective, so I don't see anything but the strain. Again, glad you enjoyed it though.

I liked the different angle you took, with her in the driver's seat as the corrupter. I always enjoy when you have the boyfriend/fiance/husband put them in the situation and inadvertently encourage the cheating. This had some believability issues and an abrupt end, but was a very fine story -- you undersold it!


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