Update (28/5/20)

Thank you. I'm glad you enjoy my stories. I am looking forward to see what you all think of the story.

I am craving for the gf to do cruel and evil things to the "sweet,loving" bf without him knowing it. Anyway, i just want to add and say that your work is amazing.

Yeah, nobody is reading this for total realism, just things that make the cheating hotter. I could read those shitty cuck stories if I wanted a semi-realistic reaction, instead of stories with a trusting, naive bf/husband.

Everything with cheating ends up with tropes though. Answers to 'where were you' and 'why are you red and your hair is a mess' always end up with similar tropes. Just because they are a trope doesn't mean that the story can't be fun. It's just good not to do them all the time. But the same can be said for anything, like why the boyfriend doesn't wonder where his girlfriend is during the sex and doesn't pick up on her and his friend flirting. And so on. There comes a point when you can only write so many stories before there is repetition somewhere.

Careful though -- it's full of tropes: "I was just exercising", "that's the TV", "I'm just eating a DELICIOUS [phallic food item]"...though any of these can be done right. The other great one is the phone sex with bf where she's describing what he's doing to her, but that's what's ACTUALLY going on with the affair: "Take the condom off, I want to feel you raw", "I can feel your balls slap my clit while you pound me doggy", etc.

Yeah, love anything where it should be clear what's going but the bf is too trusting or naive to realize lol

I know what you mean. I love a hot phone scene.

It's so good, especially when she's breathing hard and there's rhythmic slapping sounds and he still isn't suspicious

yes!! please have the gf manipulating her sweet boyfriend in a cruel way possible. on the phone. its so hot the more evil she is.

There is something hot about her talking on the phone with her guy while she's getting fucked, isn't there?

Good times. Would love to have her bf call while she's getting fucked, assuming he's not in the same room.

She has some of the build up without the guy there at all. But it explains why she is as she is when she meets him

Always love your build up, looking forward to your slightly different approach to this one.

The support is appreciated. I would like to release more often too. I write and I get so frustrated when I need to take a break as I can see what I want done and it's just so slow. But I know that I would just write rubbish if I pushed it, as I've done it before. I'd rather take my time and have it worth it in the end.

You do you man, it’s been working so far. While I selfishly wish you released more often, it continues to be worth a wait and why I’ve been following your page on Lit and now here for more than 10 years.

Elmer Fudd