Update (13th April 2017)
Added 2017-04-13 03:06:56 +0000 UTCJust a short update.
I have spent the last couple of weeks writing and deleting the same few paragraphs over and over. Essentially I have been trying to fix something that just didn't seem right and both life and the story wouldn't cooperate.
Fortunately now I think it is fine. At least I am happy with it enough to leave it until I come back in the editing phase. Most changes I leave until the editing but those that will make changes I will need to rely on when writing later parts of the story obviously have to be fixed before I can move on. I think there is only one more of those now, but before I continue writing the rest of the first sex scene the current one needs to be cut down. At the moment it would be about 300 pages just for the first sex scene, and even I am not happy with the repetition.
Still, I always said there was a lot to do but I think this is good news. Still focused and making progress, that is better than nothing, and I am happier with the story and have come up with a lot of good ideas for later.
So a long way to go yet - but I am working hard on it and getting there.
~Shadow~
