hibari suits your art style , she looks like one of your original characters.
the distressed expression on hibari suits her well and looks really cute.
your version of hibari looks like a cute doll , i would love to see her full color paizuri art someday!
i also reccomend ryoubi , murasaki , minori , kafuru and aimu for paizuri in full color and sketches "but they would look their best in full color" they are all amazing oppai loli characters