Hanima and Gretchen (Twine) - Preview
Added 2019-03-24 21:55:50 +0000 UTCHere's a story I'm working on in Twine. There's a few paths to explore although (for this early, first-part-only version) they all end up at the same place. (And a few variables it tracks--though again, they don't affect much at this stage.) Probably some bugs/typos in there, too, but I hope you enjoy it, and watch for more soon!
Comments
That was actually pretty great!
Shelby Decker
2019-03-28 12:19:31 +0000 UTCFantastic as always. I especially enjoyed the teasing with your license and the general back and forth dynamic. I can't wait to see more!
Kestrel
2019-03-25 20:54:09 +0000 UTCTry opening it in firefox, that worked for me.
Kestrel
2019-03-25 17:34:52 +0000 UTCAww, I can’t seem to view it on Apple stuff. :( I gotta get a new laptop.
Basic-Account
2019-03-25 17:29:44 +0000 UTCThis is super fun! I really love how the eating sequences slow down as you progress and there's a nice feeling of Oof.
Indighost Gengar / Lavender Spectre
2019-03-24 23:22:37 +0000 UTCThis is awesome! I'm loving the story so far and can't wait to see more. :D
Tach0012
2019-03-24 22:12:43 +0000 UTC