The Confession Ep.2 Script - WIP - SPOILER
Added 2024-11-11 01:13:07 +0000 UTCTL:DR If you want to ruin the story for yourself.
Here's a rough script and storyboard. This will change as needed. I notice that the video timing ends up different than the initial written script. Check it out if you're curious and don't mind spoiling the story for yourself.
I've gotten some strong but good criticism that the narration is cringe. I admit that I'm also not a writer so if there are any lines that are horrible, let me know.
Comments
I absolutely agree with this take. It’s like she’s trying to play him for a fool so she be in that situation again without suspicion
Rouse8
2024-11-17 00:27:03 +0000 UTCGood to hear. That's what I was trying to convey.
Ogirls Art
2024-11-12 20:49:21 +0000 UTCI like the dialogue, I think it being hammy is kinda part of the charm. Shes being facetious and given how the dialoge in the moment at times contradicts her retelling to her boyfriend, shes hiding how much she liked it very poorly. Just kinda fits
Loins Magnum
2024-11-11 23:55:10 +0000 UTCThanks, I'll check it out!
Ogirls Art
2024-11-11 17:52:41 +0000 UTCFor this series, Chloe will stay they way she is. This way it's consistent, but smaller an option for other vids/characters. Remind me when I'm doing a new character and I'll put it up for a poll.
Ogirls Art
2024-11-11 17:52:22 +0000 UTCTo each his own. but i would say no way! her boobs fit perfectly to he slim body.
sami acbar
2024-11-11 17:30:11 +0000 UTCI have written a version of the plot myself according to your idea of how it develops. I sent you the text in PM. Can't wait to see the next episode, and i don't mind if it will take longer to publish if it means you need more time to adjust the animation and make it even longer. In my opinion, the longer the animation - the better. like a short, well made and enticing movie
sami acbar
2024-11-11 17:16:54 +0000 UTCLooks great! When do you think it’ll be ready? If I can make a suggestion, maybe the tits could be a bit smaller to match the slimmer body shape better. How about a poll on that?
Albert
2024-11-11 13:37:51 +0000 UTCI do like that mold monster.
Ogirls Art
2024-11-11 05:05:27 +0000 UTCBesides this 3-episode series, I usually take suggestions for things like which monster. Then I do a poll to see what the majority wants. If you want an alien on the line-up, make a suggestion when I finish this next vid or when I ping you all for suggestions. Never thought about a female alien but Gifdoozer has a great avatar female.
Ogirls Art
2024-11-11 05:04:31 +0000 UTCNot sure if this is the right post to comment this on. But, regardless of penetration I personally prefer the more alien / non human it is. As from previous work and being explored more now in current videos; is this a creative choice to be expected in the future that’s consistent? Also will the female character always be human?
Cole Hauschild
2024-11-11 04:55:43 +0000 UTCStill 3 episodes. I'm just getting overly ambitious. My own worst enemy.
Ogirls Art
2024-11-11 03:57:38 +0000 UTCI'm finding the story telling part interesting, but it means longer vids. The worse part is if the video falls flat, it's even more wasted time. Fingers crossed!
Ogirls Art
2024-11-11 03:56:22 +0000 UTCOh, is confession two episodes long? Assumed it was going to be trilogy. :)
Pichu Pikachu
2024-11-11 01:30:34 +0000 UTCThis is a lot pf process, not easy. But Thank you for your hard work. Plz take your time and take care of yourself too❤️
JyNxI3
2024-11-11 01:28:29 +0000 UTC
