The Confession - Script - SPOILER! & Poll
Added 2024-07-20 22:19:41 +0000 UTCTL:DR - Script. Spoilers. Vote if you like it.
This is the script for the first video of a 3 part series. The video will be conveyed as a confession of sorts, read by the main character. The scenes play with sounds and talking, with a narration overlay in between the talking. The in-scene dialogue and actions are listed under the "in person" column. The narration is listed in the "in confession" column. Even though the text is in different columns, the order is read from top to bottom, line by line. To the left is a picture of the scene that would accompany the dialog.
Not exactly sure about the pacing, so we'll see how it goes. Highly likely to change. It's also written with werewolves in mind, but it can be adapted to other creatures. I'll have a poll soon for you all to pick the baddies.
I was going back and forth about sharing this. I think knowing the story ahead of time will spoil some of the fun, but I wanted to get feedback to see if this is going to work for the majority of you.
For those that don't mind having the surprise spoiled and want to give feedback, please do. For those that want to be surprised, don't read further.
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Comments
Why waste a good opprotunity? 😁
Ogirls Art
2024-07-25 23:42:28 +0000 UTCUnless he decides to follow her in one of the times she sneaks out watching it all happens and being surprised himself how it turns him on seeing her being ganged by werewolves. having hard time to accept it at first but in the end wanting to join in on the action
sami acbar
2024-07-25 22:30:59 +0000 UTCI was thinking something similar. The whole talking part makes it more interesting but much harder. How to sound hot but not cheesy. But yeah, in the end, everyone's happy. Except the poor boyfriend.
Ogirls Art
2024-07-22 15:35:05 +0000 UTCone thing you could do, after the first creature cums in/on her, she gets a "taste" of it... and then decides she wants more... so then she begs for the other creatures to fill up her holes... she can (shyfully) admit that it feels good to be "filled up"... and as the scene progresses she gets more and more eager and excited and finally very happy and satiated :) and then the future episodes can be the woman sneaking out at night to satisfy her new hunger ...
Bbk1
2024-07-22 15:26:08 +0000 UTCHeck yeah! Never gets old.
Ogirls Art
2024-07-22 13:38:58 +0000 UTCface down azz up that's the way I like to ...
Bbk1
2024-07-22 11:34:59 +0000 UTCProne version would be nice too
bshields619#6969
2024-07-21 21:18:50 +0000 UTCThat said... i'm also excited to see how it turns out! as varbind suggested the story can use a little tweaking but i really like where it's going. well done mate
sami acbar
2024-07-21 18:31:24 +0000 UTCI agree, a girl getting excited to get penetrated adds to the kinky side of the story and much better.
sami acbar
2024-07-21 18:29:23 +0000 UTCtotally get the no at first then yes. I guess it is all comes down to when that line is crossed, before any physical forcing or after. Anyway something for you to think about.
Interested
2024-07-21 16:17:34 +0000 UTCI absolutely understand and appreciate your frankness. I was going for a no at first, that becomes a yes but I totally agree that it's not for everyone. I do like your phrase suggestions though. Maybe put some of that in episode 2 or 3. Again, thanks for the honest constructive feedback!
Ogirls Art
2024-07-21 16:06:30 +0000 UTCI really don't like that initial.... I am just going to say it... rape angle. Everyone has their own thing, but it would be way better to me if she was initially scared, then saw the size of the reveal and went for it willingly. Instead of please no, she could instead say things like, give it to me, more, etc
Interested
2024-07-21 15:21:22 +0000 UTCThat's what she said 🤣! Eventually I'll try but not in this series. Don't think I can pull it off.
Ogirls Art
2024-07-21 05:12:56 +0000 UTCdo you think triple P is ever on the table? :D:D:D
Bbk1
2024-07-21 02:36:18 +0000 UTCI honestly don't know. If I just did the video like i normally do, about a month but I'm looking into doing more with voice. Maybe voice actress and doing lip syncing? Or voice changers? (but just imagining recording myself in the throes of passion.. I just can't) So timing wise, it's unclear. I know you asked earlier. Sorry for the late response.
Ogirls Art
2024-07-20 23:44:14 +0000 UTCMaybe you could explore the DP experience with this kind of story...
Skarn
2024-07-20 23:03:55 +0000 UTCWhen does a new video come out?
Tom Groove
2024-07-20 22:35:11 +0000 UTC
