Offers, Chapter 01: Part 03
Added 2023-12-28 14:00:12 +0000 UTCHalf Res Edition
*Contains magical weight gain, food, feedism and hints of non-con.
Token agreed to yet another offer made to him to get home quick. But the effects of the elixir he was given are starting to take hold...
Comments
One thing I especially appreciate is that in those new pages you actually feel the discomfort and weirdness of Cole randomly appearing out of nowhere. I have to admit when I first read the old chapter, not knowing anything else, I thought Cole and Token were like on friendly terms, hence why I was a bit confused afterward seeing Token's growing discomfort with Cole. But with this new beginning, from the get got the awkwardness of the two is obvious and you have the foreshadowing of the future toxicity, and this is so great X3 Not that toxicity is great but you know... The chapter is great X)
Abigail Gill
2023-12-29 12:13:56 +0000 UTCThank yooou, you're sweet AF x) It feels good to finally put to the page how I always intended for the beginning to be written~
Nox
2023-12-28 21:25:21 +0000 UTCThis is grandiose. Seeing this updated version with the fresh memory of what the old chapter was... it feels like a crown proudly worn on the artist's head X)
Abigail Gill
2023-12-28 20:30:21 +0000 UTC
