Something that really appeals to me in comics is how the sound effects become a character in the storytelling. Erik Larson is particularly good at this, and I've been re-reading a lot of his Spider-Man run recently. The comics I'm reading at the time tends to reflect in the stuff I'm drawing, I suppose.
Manic
2025-10-19 07:55:56 +0000 UTC
This page feels like it could work with OR without the sounds, at least IMHO. I think this is because of how you've used the space on the page to depict the characters' actions...not to mention your rather effective colouring. Great job, Manic!