Update Pag. 74 NSFW!
Added 2025-03-30 16:40:05 +0000 UTCThere's not much to say...everyone likes massages 😘
https://pleasurebonbon-next.com/comics/volume/1/page/74/
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Thanks for the valuable suggestions, I will make some changes and update the page with the next update!
Vanessa San
2025-04-15 18:29:59 +0000 UTC"Oh, girls just wanna have fun!" Oh look at those two, being such good friends. ;) The dialogue is fairly good here, but some of the translations do sound more like direct translations rather than, well, natural "speech." "A nice massage will help me relax my nerves." This line sounds like a combo of "A nice massage will help me relax," and "A nice massage should help calm my nerves." I would recommend sticking with just one of them however. "I will make you forget the annoyance of that villain!" This one I'm not sure what to make of. The words "annoyance" and "villain" makes me think there's a word in Italian that does mean those things, but the feel is different. "Yes please! It's beautiful! I love it!" I'm not sure if "beautiful" is the word I would have used in this situation. I mean, "divine" or "heavenly," or "wonderful" or something like that for sure, but "beautiful" is such a visual thing, and I don't think Betty is praising the look of what Violet is doing... But I could be wrong. :P "And your special spot... Do we want to massage here too?" This reads to me like you wrote something in Italian -- with a clear intended meaning in your head -- but when you translated it the meaning didn't quite come along. "Should I massage it too?" "Do you want me to massage it too?" "Should we massage it too?" "Should I massage here too?" "Do you want me to massage here too?" "Should we massage here too?" Is Violet actually asking Betty, or is it a rhetorical question? While I might think something got lost in the translation, this thought could also affect my interpretation and make me see fault where there is none. Anyway, beautiful page, Vanessa! Gorgeous. :)
Erold
2025-04-05 20:24:34 +0000 UTCA Princess deserves the best of massages. ;3
Silvador
2025-04-02 18:13:42 +0000 UTC
