Update pag.58 for Patrons!
Added 2022-09-16 12:16:30 +0000 UTCThe new page is ready ( 3 formats) !
https://pleasurebonbon-next.com/comics/volume/1/page/58/
Now I am creating a new ebook with the next PBB chapter, it will be ready this weekend, and in the meantime I am writing new upcoming character bios!
Although it is fun and stimulating to draw new characters ( but I have to research costumes and hairstyles ) it is not easy, I have to put together dates, events and history ( understood as the facts of the last century ) It will therefore also be instructive XD
But I have to correct a couple of previous pages that had errors too, and then there will be many new updates from now on, all by surprise! :)
V.
Comments
Oh, that's right. Well then, in that case, you're right, "arrange" would indeed be the right term :)
Erold
2022-09-24 11:38:58 +0000 UTCI understood the difference! But so... I think "arrange" is the right word, because Betty also refers to the two boys, and if you remember PBB Legacy, before preparing William for her work, Betty organizes a "trap". William is secretly filmed losing his virginity to Violet, and later Betty will use that filmation to blackmail William! So in my opinion "arrange" was the word for a plan and organization of the trap. Did I say it right?
Vanessa San
2022-09-23 16:21:36 +0000 UTCI would guess it's because she was partially hidden under the pillow, and there were other... more obvious distractions right there. XD I will now keep my eyes open for Starlight in every page. I hope you'll find some interesting places to hide her. ;3
Silvador
2022-09-21 20:21:55 +0000 UTCI'm just happy to help :) As for "arrange" vs "prepare," while both words means the same thing, the "sense" of the words are different I think. Like, I don't think you can arrange *for* something, but you can *prepare* for something. Or in other words: if you would arrange a wedding, then it sounds like you're the one holding the wedding. But if you're preparing for a wedding, then it sounds more like you're just going to it. But that might just be me. I'm basing this on that it will be like the legacy version, where Betty's less "arranging" for Willian to get the buttler job and more "preparing" him for it.
Erold
2022-09-21 15:23:10 +0000 UTCYes "prepare". Does it sounds better?
Vanessa San
2022-09-21 14:21:29 +0000 UTCReally amazing! :D I really appreciate your help in correcting the texts in the best possible way! :D Thank you!!
Vanessa San
2022-09-21 14:20:34 +0000 UTCThank you!! But how is it possible that no one has noticed Starlight Glimmer even on page 38? LOL XD
Vanessa San
2022-09-21 14:18:56 +0000 UTCI'm very much excited for what you have in store for us, Vanessa! On the subject of errors, there are a few I think I see. "It would seem that someone didn't last, already in the morning, for so much fun at the bar!" I think he's saying that William's a lightweight that drinks a lot in the morning? But I'm not entirely sure. "It's still early to tell." Shouldn't it be: "It's still *too* early to tell"? "Did you verified?" "Did you verify?" or perhaps just: "You verified?" "Is one of the wealthiest and most respected members." I think it's: "*It's* one of the wealthiest and most respected members." "Did he say around he was looking for a job uhu? I think just: "Did he say he was looking for a job uhu?" And you meant "Uhu"? Not: "Huh"? I do wonder about something:, when Betty says "Arrange," did she mean "Prepare"?
Erold
2022-09-17 20:06:42 +0000 UTCThe page is freaking amazing, Vanessa! :DDDDDDDDD The plot is very suspenseful, but does this mean we're close to the end of this chapter? o.O Also.....Like Silvador said.....Betty is.....Oh my goodness. O;;O
Kanbe Namura
2022-09-17 07:45:47 +0000 UTCNow that I've had a chance to look at the page, Betty is looking as ravishing as ever. Definitely my favourite part of the page. But, I'm biased, so no surprise, there. XD I like Loucille's sense of humour, also. hehe And... is that... a Starlight Glimmer plush?! O: I do approve. :D
Silvador
2022-09-16 16:32:24 +0000 UTCsuch lovely looking ladies. just looking at the puc above makes me want to see Betty and Io together. ;3
Silvador
2022-09-16 14:25:53 +0000 UTCI mean would help I guess
MaxL8
2022-09-16 13:48:59 +0000 UTCThank you! Yes ... I imagined it, but then I hope you understand soon, he is unconscious and the two girls are left and right. Maybe I have to move the arrow to the bottom of the balloon?
Vanessa San
2022-09-16 13:06:58 +0000 UTCNice page. My only issues is the speech bubbles coming from William make it seem like that he's the one talking when he isn't.
MaxL8
2022-09-16 12:39:09 +0000 UTC
