VanessaSan

Gold Reward! Pag.54 BW! 200 DPI

Added 2022-04-04 19:23:26 +0000 UTC

"Pages without a background are easier to do!"

Not so, above all if they are full of action and expressions that you re-drawing several times before you find the right one ... and fists clenched are not easy.

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However, I have an anecdote on this page, or rather a reference.

When I was making William's arrogant expression ( second panel ) in which he invites Hans to hit his face, to fight with him, I immediately thought of HIM, the great Muhammad Ali Cassius Clay.

I found a compelling and nice photo and I HAD to use it as a reference.

I hope it's not an offensive thing for anyone to associate this champion with my foolish and arrogant protagonist. It's just that that expression, surely made in a joking moment, was perfect.

But what I ask you is to help me this time with the onomatopoeia, can you suggest them please? I know PUNCH and SLAM, I would like put SLAM for the blow dealt to George, but I'm not sure it's okay.

And when it falls, what should it be like? The usual THUD !?

Thank you!

Ghost balloons are temporary to see where it would fit nicely.