Updates! Pag.36 BW ( NSFW HD) and a new Custom Sketch ( NSFW HD)!
Added 2020-09-20 19:46:24 +0000 UTCPage 36 is ready to being colored ! Backgrounds will be added during coloring process.
Do you think I have won the challenge of making an explicit scene into a softcore ones, and that it still gives those...uhm, feelings?
https://pleasurebonbon-next.com/rewards/pbb-next/wip/chapter-1/pag-36-bw
Plus another NSFW update is the Custom Sketch commissioned by my dear patron Kanbe who requested a character that has not yet appeared so far, but that you can see on this page! :D
Some old PBB Legacy fans already know secretary Bridget Janine (B.J.) Blueberry, who in PBB-Next will replace the role of Ronald and also become the accountant of Delight Castle. Horray! XD
Obviously the version on the site is without the musical notes ... in those spots ;)
https://pleasurebonbon-next.com/rewards/pbb-next/pinups/custom-sketches
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Comments
1. Yes you did win the reward making a hardcore scene a softcore scene, while still having that "feeling", Vanessa. lol ^/////^ 2. I'm glad that a lot of people love the picture of Bridget! :DDDD I loved the look of her when I saw her a couple of years, and I'm happy Vanessa that Vanessa did (as always) a superb drawing her. ^o^
Kanbe Namura
2020-10-08 06:04:12 +0000 UTCThank you and many thanks for the hint! I will follow it ;)
Vanessa San
2020-09-22 17:06:01 +0000 UTCInstead I am very happy with your feedback! I really want to follow the advice of my patrons especially those who have been following me for years and that is why I give the higher tiers the opportunity to preview the BW page, your opinion counts a lot! I remember when I drew three arms to Mary XD. I intend to follow your advice and I will think of a change during coloring, which still takes time anyway (since I use so many colors ... all of them! XD) I would be happy if you continue to express yourself again in similar cases because this helps me to improve! Thank you so much for your honesty and spirit to point your doubt as spectator,
Vanessa San
2020-09-22 17:04:46 +0000 UTCAmazing, blue jay is my favorite side character
John
2020-09-21 22:59:18 +0000 UTCI find the middle panel a bit...odd, to be honest. I don't know, of course what else will be added to the picture, but right now it looks like Betty has sex with an invisible man. Or that she is showing off her technique to a "student". My personal opinion is that for softcore scenes, it looks better to hide the details with the bodies of the characters, like it's done in the last panel. Alternatively, an object, like a pillow or something, can be used to block the view. Close-ups of facial expressions can work too, and I think that anything below Betty's nose in this panel, could actually be excluded, and it would still be clear what she's doing, without actually showing anything. I don't like to voice a negative opinion of any of your work, Vanessa, but I simply try to give honest and (hopefully) constructive feedback.
Symphony
2020-09-20 23:09:08 +0000 UTCLet's start with B.J., the blue jay not the secne.😁 She looks wonderful even with the well placed musical notes. Always liked that character from the old series, good to see her back. He made a very good choice to have her as the custom sketch, thank you for allowing everyone to enjoy it. Now the scene from the comic. It looks wonderful so far, you did a great job on the Mary Blue scene, one of my favorites, this one looks like it is going to be no exception. Princess Betty looks great. Fine job.
Michael S Marks
2020-09-20 22:49:19 +0000 UTCI still really love the chips girl. She's a great mix of super cute and that teasing outfit with her tail purposefully pushing her skirt up.
The14th
2020-09-20 20:35:33 +0000 UTCThe page looks lovely! Betty's breasts look delicious and her rump is lovely. I'd suggest perhaps adding a touch of wetness between her legs, near the top of her thighs, if that isn't too explicit for the rating. As for overcoming the challenge, you did that with Mary's scene. I look forward to seeing what comes with this scene. And B.J. looks ravishing!
Silvador
2020-09-20 19:54:27 +0000 UTC
