Update: Early Access to pag.20 for Patrons ! NSFW
Added 2019-08-31 20:36:29 +0000 UTCEDIT2:
So I've decided that I will correct the error I had kept on this page, it will be updated as soon as I finish drawing. 21, which is going to have a lot of BKG :). Meanwhile take it up, because it will become a "collector" page XD like a blooper, as it will be deleted and reposted with the right page! ;)
EDIT:
Greycat Silvermane said:
"This is indeed beautiful. Although I have to point out that in the top panel you accidentally gave her 2 left hands (one under the pillow, one between her legs)"
Yes, you are right, I've noticed that mistake during inking phase but I wanted to keep it like a sort of..."animation" XD and because I really like that way of tightening the pillow with two hands.
You know that in animation or in comics the characters sometimes split, William has doubled his body parts a couple of panels in PBB Legacy, when he eats and when he dries after the bath. I therefore found it a nice mistake and left it, as if it were moving and you saw more than one position in a cartoon. But if you think it's not good I could take a day to edit and change the page.
Let me knows your opinion about it!
Should I correct it or leave it like this? After all, it's an idyllic scene.
( I don't mind if someone can tease me for that, I left the error of my own accord, it's anyway entertainment if people will talk about it!) :)
I've finished page 20!
https://pleasurebonbon-next.com/comics/volume/1/page/20
It was difficult to draw beautiful anatomically correct hands with 4 fingers XD so large, I assure you that it is much easier to draw small hands, because when you draw in large, you need to be more accurate in detail, you can be faster and approximate when you drawing smaller.
I hope you like this page! ^_^
As always pay attention to the visual size of the site pages depending on your pledge, checked on top right the options of size view :)
V.
Comments
I didn't even notice, to be honest. I was too focused on other things. Personally, I don't think it really works, in this case, for the "speedy movement" perception. It just looks more like she has three arms. Such animated moments usually depict quick movements, but for it to work here, she would need to be quickly moving her arm from or to between her legs. The problem with that being that, as established in the previous page, her hand was already down there, so one would ask why she moved it away, especially since she is continuing down there on this page. It would be a minor interruption of her actions that simply seems to make no sense.
Silvador
2019-09-01 11:47:41 +0000 UTCMmmm. The feels are real right now. Once again, I am absolutely awestruck by the breathtaking artistry on display. Its these kind of things that truly make me fall in love with PBB and Mary Blue. <3 <3 <3
ToddRogue69
2019-09-01 10:58:57 +0000 UTCBravo!!!! Very good Kanbe :D !!! Indeed I've written this reply to Silvador under the post of August 11th: " I have something really original also for the following page! I'm designing a very particular layout ispire by a memory. I was impressed by an old OAV of a Japanese hentai anime that I had seen on VHS ... I don't remember the title of the anime, but it's from the 80s or 90s and there was a scene that really impressed me as idea and I would like to try to represent it in my own way in the next page. I only remember that it was set in a female college, I watched this hentai in 90s." See?? I always say the the truth! XD
Vanessa San
2019-09-01 08:46:01 +0000 UTCI've noticed that mistake during inking phase but I wanted to keep it like a sort of..."animation" since you see the image from from left to right. You know that in animation or in comics the characters sometimes split, William has doubled his body parts a couple of times in PBB Legacy, when he eats and when he dries after the bath. I therefore found it a nice mistake and left it, as if it were moving and you saw more than one position in a cartoon. But if you think it's not good ... I could take a day to edit and change the page, but I really like that way of tightening the pillow with two hands. I will write this in the post with an edit to also know the opinions of others :)
Vanessa San
2019-09-01 08:28:35 +0000 UTCAn absolutely exquisite page. This actually makes me glad for the lowered age rating because it means you can get creative (like this) in ways to show things that would otherwise be more blatant. I can't wait to see how you portray her climax. >:3
Silvador
2019-09-01 01:55:21 +0000 UTCThis is indeed beautiful. Although I have to point out that in the top panel you accidentally gave her 2 left hands (one under the pillow, one between her legs)
Grey 'Greycat' Silvermane
2019-08-31 23:06:53 +0000 UTCO;;O Okay Vanessa....I just....want to say this..... @;;@ *Takes a DEEP breath*.......OH MY GODDDDDD!!!!!!!!!!! :DDDDDDDDDDDDDDD EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 This picture is FAN-FREAKING-TASTIC VANESSA!!!!! ^o^ HOLY COW! X3 I LOVED this page a LOT!! ^;;^ The way Mary is masturbating reminds me of the hold hentai OVA's from the 80's and 90's as a way how they got past the Japanese censors. ^-^ Mary looks so stunning here with her beautiful body (her breasts, nipples, face, THE WHOLE PACKAGE)! ^//////^ You did an outstanding job on this page Vanessa. :'D This was well worth the wait. :'3
Kanbe Namura
2019-08-31 21:30:31 +0000 UTC
