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Added 2019-08-12 14:58:33 +0000 UTCI can say that this page is true hot because I made it during terribly hot days in Italy!
I love this page, it looks like an illustration, without the texts it could be a beautiful print! :D
Speaking of texts, you may have noticed that so far I have not written the baloons with "dirty" words spoken during situations ... I mean "Oh yes! Ha ha aaaah! Feel good! More!" ...
you know, this kind of stuff ...
and the sounds "Plish, slip, slosh, fap ..." because... I don't know, they seem useless and so cheap, and fillers and cover the images.
Do you feel the need for ordinary lustful words, verses and sounds or that's fine also like that? Because I would like to use a type of romantic book storytelling and there are already images to show it all.
I think adding common lewd sounds and words it is a clichèd add and does not add anything special to the atmosphere in PBB-Next, I mean it is part of the difference between PBB Legacy, which is more dirty ;P
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Astro Boy Artist 742
2019-08-14 02:59:44 +0000 UTCPleasure Bon Bon Next
Silvador
2019-08-13 22:43:48 +0000 UTCWhat comic is this called?
StreetbreakerX2
2019-08-12 23:20:54 +0000 UTCCan I first just say......HOLY MOLY! OoO This new page is FREAKING AWESOME!!!! :DDDDDD This scene where Mary is.... exploring herself @////@, is outstanding! ^o^ This is another page that I'll be....looking at for quite a while. ^////^; As for my thoughts of adding lustful words, verses, and naughty sound effects: I've always believed that it's the artists personal opinion if they want to add that to their comic or not. :o Seeing as you're making more of a romantic comic, I don't think they are necessary. :) However if you add some lewd words or sounds effects, that's fine by me. ^_^ Like Silvador said, I've read a lot of hentai that have added a LOT more sound texts versus just showing more on the screen. XD Though that could be either a stigma from comics putting sound effects in since the beginning of super hero comics. :o It could also be from the fact that (for Hentai at least) they have to write a lot of the words out, due to the censors in Japan preventing them from display (both the male and female) private parts. o-o But I do have a suggestion for you, Vanessa. ^-^ Since this is more of a romantic comic, you could add Shojo type sound effects in situations. :3 Like if Mary sees a boy, she can have the *heart thumping* effect on that panel. :D But like I said, anything you decide to add in the pages is good in my book, Vanessa. ^o^ P.S. Oh Vanessa, you could also say that this page of Mary is spicy~ ;D Like the food in Italy is~ XD
Kanbe Namura
2019-08-12 22:00:15 +0000 UTCIn this comic's case, less is definitely more as far as dirty dialogue and sound effects are concerned. The graphics manage to speak for themselves in this page and i couldn't praise it any more than i do. I love it.
ToddRogue69
2019-08-12 21:42:39 +0000 UTCI wholly agree with you on the words and sound effects. I didn't even notice they weren't there until you mentioned them, in fact. I've read a number of hentai and the excessive use of sound effects often detracts from the scene and the moment. And as it's a more sensual, romantic atmosphere you're aiming for, the "dirty talk" would somewhat ruin that atmosphere. I wouldn't say remove it all completely, as some moments may call for just the right thing, such as a more pronounced "GASP!" at just the right moment during a particularly intense time. I believe subtly is key, here and so far you're doing a bang-up job of it. :D (that means a really good job, in case you've never heard the phrase before.)
Silvador
2019-08-12 18:00:57 +0000 UTC
