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Pag.#19 Layout

This is a preview for all my Patrons, to thank you for supporting me this month with patience!

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It is the first work I have done yesterday (in addition to a test of coloring a pinup) with the new tablet, this is the passage of skecthes on the layouts that I quickly pen, I am going to inking directly on these sketches, changing and editing something, I usually make changes during inking. 

I wanted these pages of Mary (which pleases herself, and this is not the only one ;) ! ) to be sweet and heavenly, like a dream, so without the edges of the panels, more like "manga-like" composition ...

I wanted to know from you if you like the idea that the only edge that divides the panels is the embroidered lace of her open night dress and if you can see that the pink session is the fabric while the central blue session is her fur, with her breast, as background! 

I know this composition is a bit risky, maybe a little too much .. ."Goldfinger Poster" ?? You know ... the opening of the film Goldfinger (007), it was realized by projecting the scenes and characters on a woman's body.

I like this idea for this page, because it's particular, let me know if is not too messy and if you like it!  ^_^

However I really like working on this tablet !!  :D 

V.

Pag.#19 Layout

Comments

It's certainly better than in the previous version, since It was a little too... exaggerated.

CZeta

... Mi fa piacere che ti trovi bene con i nuovi strumenti

CZeta

Oh the page layout is looking good, I'm glad the new tablet is out for you.

Jazzyman

Mmm. Now this is gorgeous. Mary's poses, the layout of the frames and the all around style and presentation really make this a real beauty of a sight. As much as i loved Mary's masturbation scene in the Legacy comic, i must admit, this new version might out-do the original. Especially in style and presentation.

ToddRogue69

This is definently a plus. Go for it

Richard Williams

HELLO! This is... wow. *fans self* Oh, boy. Love it. Love it all. Love everything. And I really like the background concept. ;) I'm curious, though. Will there be a pose of her licking herself, as she did in the legacy comic?

Silvador

Glad to hear you're loving the new tablet as much as you are! I can't imagine what it would be like to have been using a Cintiq for so long before effectively having to *downgrade* to something that's no longer a Cintiq, but it's wonderful that you're having the success you're having with your Huion! Of course, the results really just speak for themselves. ๐Ÿ˜

Terri Mouse

O;;O Vanessa....I'm not kidding you when I tell you that I got the strongest moment of butterflies in my stomach when I saw these sketches of Mary for page 19. @;;@ Then I wanted to scream like a fangirl at a Beetles concert in my work place soon afterwards. XDDDD In seriousness, this page style for page 19 looks like something you'd see in a Shojo manga (or a Josei Manga to be more precise). :3 Where the girl is dreaming of a romantic setting with a future crush of hers as they make passionate love in the heavens~ <3 Also, I love that idea of yours of having Mary's bosom, chest, and night dress be the background (while having her "sexy" moments in those little bubble areas seen in the sketch). ^//////^ I never realized that this IS like the Goldfinger movie poster! OoO Cool~ X3 As long as this won't be a very difficult task for you to make for the page, I say go for it! :D Also, I'm happy to hear that you're liking the tablet a lot. ^w^

Kanbe Namura

it looks great keep up the good work

thenerd777


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