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PBB Legacy, E-book Chapter 5, NSFW!

The first information I want to tell you is that this chapter is very very lustful ( this cover above is censored ) !

So if you're sensitive, I warn you that this chapter is definitely NSFW  

https://pleasurebonbon-next.com/rewards/PBB%20Legacy/Issue%205 

The year of realization is 2007, 4 years after the first chapter, and you can see an improvement, even if in some pages the haste has not allowed me to do them well like some others. 

The fan service with secondary characters, at the beginning and at the end of the chapter, does not have a specific connection with the story, the characters are cameos of avatars/fursonas that I created for some customers of the old site. 

This work was very difficult because I had to create avatars and insert them into the story, I was not paid by Ronald for this extra work, I had difficulty inventing situations without making the story seem ... strange. So it's not something I will do again for PBB-Next, not at the moment. If add this other commitment to my work I already know  it will creates too much anxiety and stress for me. I will leave the avatars and fursonas for future commissions, when I start to do them again

Regarding the main story, I loved and still love the scene between Red and Betty, it is so full of passion and we understand that the two love each other.

It is the first time that in PBB there are two characters in love who have sex because they like each other. And it is interesting to find out all the information during their chat before making love, the characters have movement, expressiveness, and they say virtually many things that makes us understand much of the story.  I've made a good job LOL 

I really like Red's face when Betty, at the end, expresses her concern about Mary ... believing that the engagement is dissolved ... 

He doesn't say anything ... but ... we can see very well in his eyes that he did something he should not do. And he knows it.

V.

PBB Legacy, E-book Chapter 5, NSFW!

Comments

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Marcin Hillar

Oh my god! D: Ronald is such a self-centered, no good, piece of crap of this WORLD! (◣_◢) I also saw what you said to The Adept. :( Reading this, I don't know if I should get angry or just cry. ;_; I'm so, so, SO sorry to hear what Ronald has done to you and the other artists (that made fan-art). :'( I....I'm just speechless. T-T Thank you for telling us the truth and backstory of what was happening on the old site. What I believe though is that Ronald is getting the karma he deserves right now. You are becoming sucessful without him, AND you're getting the backing (and support) from your fans now. :') And I believe that you'll be getting bigger and bigger with your success of PBB-Next with each passing month, Vanessa. :'D

Kanbe Namura

Thank you so much for the nice words! I'm trying to find time on my rainy Sunday morning to respond to the comments below the video but I don't know if I'll do it in time today. But in the meantime I'll answer you here about your last question. And you can also read my answer to The Adept above. I confirm that I have never received extra payments to create Royal Members and for additional Spin-off comics that I payed, I have never received a contribution reimbursement to pay commissions and extra guest artists' illustrations to increase the value of the site. I paid everything by myself. I also wanted to pay the fan art, but I couldn't pay other money for what I have not commissioned, fan art I mean ... so for a while I asked Ronald to contribute at least giving the fan art artists a one-month subscription to repay them for the artistic donation! I asked it to Ronald. He would never have done it. Because he was the one who managed and created the accounts. I never knew how to create an account. Some artists will be able to confirm that it is all true, that they received a submission in exchange for their fan art but some did not receive it because Ronald forgot it. I always had to remind and tell him how to do things and he didn't. But he took 50% of the profits for himself every time. If it was 50% ... I can't know ... Anyway, it's obvious that I tell the truth because if Mr. Ronald Trang want to speek for himself by proving that he paid me royal members, extra comics, extra work and never paid me royaltiess since 2017 so far ... well he only has to speak and show papers and prove that I lie. But he can't do it. It is silent. Because he knows he always denied me a regular contract, he is not an editor, he is a selfish businnes man who has gotten more than he deserved from his job as a WEBMASTER and cannot prove otherwise. I asked him 60% the last few months of 2017 to cover my debts and he refused to deprive himself of 10% of his share to help a friend of his who gave him so much for 13 years. At that point I realized what kind of friend it was, without heart.

Vanessa San

True. Very true. It is as if he had stolen money from me because he was still holding half the profits from my work twice. And I'll tell you more. Extra comics like Raccoon Businness and Scarlett Blut were paid for by my wallet. Per page. I paid a lot of money because I commissioned them to get the rights to these, of characters and exclusivity. And Ronald NEVER refound me a share but benefited every month from 50% of the site's earnings, which were higher when there were extra comics. In fact he should remove Scarlett Blut and Raccoon Businness from the site because he didn't pay them. I paid them and they belong to me. This does not apply to the fan comics, which were donated, and on which I had no possibility of management. I would like to open a bracket about it because I don't want confusion. I commissioned the comics of Raccoon Businnes (a mini series) and Scarlett Blut (a pilot) to two Italian artists because they were my friends and I could have control over the pages and the story, talking to them without translation problems. And I wanted them finished. And I made the layout for Scarlett ( for every page + cover) and fixed on art on Raccoon Businness. About the fancomic of the Goddess of the night, it was the artist who proposed it to me, and I told her that I could give her a royal member account with no expiration in exchange. First because it wasn't my commission, second because I didn't have her own OC rights, third because she never told me the story (I couldn't read the story and so I had no control over it) and then she didn't guarantee me the pages with a deadline or an ending ... in fact her comic was interrupted for months, then she didn't deliver it to me anymore, it remained in the middle and I can't continue it. So it was never my commission, but a contribution that the author wanted to give me and on which I had no control. Which made that comic no canon. I commissioned and paid for spin-off canon directed by me.

Vanessa San

I want to apologize for being late on my comments about this new legacy champter, Vanessa. @_@ But I want to say that this legacy chapter was really wonderful! ^o^ It definitely shows how much you improved from your art from from 2003 to 2007. :D The scene of Betty and Red was....really beautiful. :') It was amazing to see how much those two wanted to be together. <3 And the sex scene was.....hot. o////o Boy seeing Betty strip tease, and see her have anal sex with Red....it made my face RED! @/////@ I also laughed at how Will is in dept to Red. XD Man has there been any person William doesn't owe a debt to? ^_^; I also laughed at (and felt bad too) for Dorian getting the bad feeling from Will and Red. lol I'm amazed at all the side characters you made in the beginning (and a little bit at the end), of the chapter, Vanessa! :O I also saw how some of the Bonbon girls fawned over Red. ;) However....I hate to change the mood but there's something I want to say, Vanessa. :( My blood gets boiled every time I hear about what Ronald told you to do with the comic, without giving you pay. DX God it makes me mad! But I'm also sorry too, that you had to force yourself to create avatars (and original characters) to make plain old sex scenes without getting paid, AND trying to make the story have a flow still. :'( When I saw your conversation with Silvador....I felt so sad that Ronald didn't even HELP you when you needed it the most. D': Though...I felt a bit of joy seeing how much your fans cared for you, and helped paid for their characters to be in the last few pages of the last chapter you made (on the old site). ;-; That's truly a beautiful thing for your fans to do. Thank you so much for posting the new legacy chapter this month, Vanessa! :'D I'm super happy that I could read the new chapter. ^w^ I can't wait to see what else you have in store for this month. :3

Kanbe Namura

I never knew ronald kinda made you make the royal avatars and that you weren't even getting paid for them espacially considering im pretty sure a good deal of everyone who did get one from you would of been more then happy to pay for them and i would again if the chance ever came up.

The Adept

your cameo was the only one as "YCH commission" together with the other members who participated, at the end of my collaboration with Ronald. I specifically asked Ronald to create a commission because I needed money since he didn't want to give me more than 50% even for a month (I needed help and he refused to close an eye for once). I was quite desperate. So for once, in the end really, I asked for help to my readers. And you along with others have agreed to pay me for those last pages. It was my salvation, that month my account was really dry. I would never have asked for a cameo payment if it wasn't the last solution for me. So thank you very much for your bid that time.

Vanessa San

This chapter is one of the reasons I adore Betty so much. Page 21 is my absolute favour page, specifically panel 4. Betty's face, her expression, is just so... mmmmph! I love mice characters. I ADORE them. When drawn well they are the single most sexy characters around. And Betty is a gleaming example of why, especially with that single seductive look. &lt;3 &lt;3 &lt;3 Overall, I'd say pages 21 and 22 are my most favourite in this chapter, not just because Betty is a mouse (although it helps a lot) but because of the poses and views. As someone who enjoys pleasing others, I love seeing how Red does this to Betty, pleasuring her with his touch. Even his seated position, while she stands, gives an air of submission to her. She is his Queen and he willingly and happily serves her. It shows he loves her, respects her, and maybe even worships her. I'm so, so grateful to have been able to enjoy some time with Betty before the Legacy comic was stopped. ^-^

Silvador

What??? Well, we'll have none of that! /s

A Patreon of the Ahts

I love your Pleasure Bon Bon Comics, Vanessa! The love triangle between Red, Mary, and Betty!

Roy Vulpes™


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