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News and Updates!

Pag. 12 is finished!

https://pleasurebonbon-next.com/comics/volume/1/page/12

But there is also an update of the BW version because there are some fixes on Fabio's body! So download the new version and have fun to see the differences with the old one if you've downloaded it ( it was deleted and overwritten) , for me now is very better!

https://pleasurebonbon-next.com/rewards/PBB%20Next/WIP/Chapter%201/Page%2012%20BW

About this page my comment is that I am really satisfied with the level of eroticism PG16 that has this reboot, in my opinion this level it is fine to be published free and to be appreciated by everyone.

I am also happy that this scene has been recreated with greater care than the PBB Legacy version because Mary is reading a much more reliable and realistic erotic novel for the era in which the PBB story is set. And it is clear that in PBB Legacy I was influenced by the demand for free and fast pornography, which did not give me time to create a context, because it was not needed, it would only have been wasted time. But now when you read the texts you will better understand the kind of books I wanted Betty to share with Mary. Not quick stories of mere pornography, but something more emotional and appreciable (and exciting of course) for a young virgin girl in Victorian era! :)

Now everything is more understandable. Now it is Pleasure Bon Bon!

Thanks to my Patrons!

And I have to thank also my translator for these pages of Bon Bon, he is a friend of mine to whom I have commissioned the translations because they were too difficult for me and I paid for it, with Patreon's money. He wanted do it for me for free because we are friends, in the past I accepted his help for free because he had a good job and told me that translating was an hobby, but since he is currently unemployed I think it's right to help him, receiving an excellent job in return! So now you know that some of Patreon's money are invested in translations for the comic and for the character bios :)

V.


PS

I would like to ask you to help me find errors in English on the pages of PBB Legacy that will be used to create PDFs because surely there are many. R corrected my texts in the baloons with photoshop before the uploads but since I can not access the site anymore I do not have the correct pages to compare with them to fix mine to re-save the formats.

So if you will find an error, typo or weird phrases in PBB Legacy let me know! :)


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Comments

Thank you! However, I also liked the original version's explicitness that established how wild you'll go with the action for your series. In short, I'll be convinced if we can have just a quick scene where that woman can enjoy the sight of that lion Fabio's big cock, perhaps as part of Mary's current fantasy.

Kenneth Chisholm

Aaah!! You've made my day with your comment! :D I am so glad and proud of that! Thank you very much for appreciate my new work, I will keep a good job with a higher standard of drawing and storytelling than the old comic! :D

Vanessa San

Wow! This is the page that sold me on your redo! The story now has a much more interesting context and sizzling romantic setting and seeing her wriggle out of her clothes is a marvel!

Kenneth Chisholm

Thank you very much Kanbe! Everytime I see there is one of your comment I prepare myself for a really enjoying time to read! XD Because I say " Ooh! Time to read the comment of Kanbe! I know that can only be full of kind words, my vitamin to recover me from the end of a day at work! " Marvelous! I should do it every time with a nice cup of tea! XD Thank you very much for everything! Ah, I still have to fix that thing about Yugoslavia that you know... but it's only because I forget to do it LOL, but I keep your suggestion! ;)

Vanessa San

Many thanks! You will see ... it will be hot but different, because even the dialogues will change and you will understand that Mary is not only eager to have sex but eager for her first love. In the first chapter he looked like a perverted, experienced girl, because I was asked to make the characters very warm and eager from the beginning. But ... she's still a virgin, and she has the character of a girl, so her way of appearing on the front pages, like an experted girl, has always seemed me a bit exaggerated. I want to show you that she is a dreamer! :)

Vanessa San

Aaah! What what a nice feeling I have in reading this comment! Thank you for to give me such a good sensation of satisfaction for my work. I wanted so hard to drawing like this, and now I have the opportunity to try to do PBB as I wanted. And i am so glad to read your feedback, thank you!

Vanessa San

Absolutely lovely. Both the artwork and the narration were beautiful. I bet Mary is having quite the good time reading this little tidbit. X3

ToddRogue69

What a wonderful page! I love everything about it. The colors work so well together. I especially like the green dress on Daphne, together with her purple hair. The level of eorticism is also something I appreciate. I think that it's stylish and classy, and much better suited for the story you're telling, than the explicit sex scenes of the old comic.

Symphony

I just read the new page, Vanessa......Oh my goodness. O/////O I....I LOVE IT!!!!! <3 <3 <3 <3 This page is extremely magnificent, Vanessa! :'D My goodness, I loved how Daphne is drawn. ^/////^ Her beauty in this page is....just astounding. o;;o When I read this page, I finally understood the romance novels for females now. XD Better late than never? ^_^; Anyways, I love this page a lot more than the legacy pages (from chapter 1) featuring Daphne. :) Mainly for the reason that you stated in your post (context) and the logical sense of Mary reading that book from Betty. ^-^ Vanessa, every time I read a new page of PBB-Next, I get super excited to see what happens next. ^o^ With that said....I'm excited for the next page. :3 But this page....I'm going to be looking at for quite a while. @;;@ Awwwww~ That's so awesome that you're paying your friend to translate the pages. :D Thanks for letting us know, Vanessa! ^w^ Also if I find any errors, typos, or weird phrases in the upcoming Legacy chapters, I'll let you know about them, Vanessa. :)

Kanbe Namura

Thank you! :D

Vanessa San

It's a gorgeous page. :D

Silvador


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