Update! Pag.03 of PBB-next, final version.
Added 2018-07-23 15:29:27 +0000 UTCPage 3 is finished and will be published soon! :D
Now I'm going to draw the pencils of the 4 pinups in bikini to rest and relax XD! I can not wait to show you and color them! *_*
Returning to the reboot of PBB-Next I remind you that the first chapter will be to all effects the reboot of the first chapter of PBB, drawn in different way and with different inserted plots.
There will be new characters and an intriguing flashback on William's past.
So this first chapter will therefore not be boring, even if you know the plot.
From the next chapter I will make a big leap forward in the story because some scenes of the old saga of PBB do not need to be redrawn but can be published free in the SFW free site.
I am referring, for example, to the job interview between Simon and William, there is no need to draw it again. So I have to find an escamotage ( a ploy) to insert those pages, as they were done, to save time and jump forward in the story to get to where we were in PBB Legacy as soon as possible . Can you give me some suggestions?
The problem will be to explain to new readers why the design style is different from the current one. I'm thinking of some episodes of cartoons or special comic books, which alternate different styles, made by other artists.
Basically ... if I wanted to insert the job interview scene into the reboot without redraw it again, so that I can be faster and move on in the story ... how would you explain it? How to insert it? In a sort of different background sheet? Instead of white ... pink? And tell: "this part of the story is taken from PBB Legacy, which is not entirely publishable, since it has adult content." ?
You know that the alternative is to draw those scenes again ... but it would be boring for both me and the old PBB readers. And anyway that work it's still very nice.
V.
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Vanessa San
2018-08-08 16:59:40 +0000 UTCI don't see page 1,2 and 3 and the new official website pleasure bonbon next.
Paul-Desrosiers
2018-08-08 08:35:16 +0000 UTCI'm taking all your suggestions seriously. There is still time to choose and I can evaluate all the hypotheses! In my opinion there are very beautiful sequences that I would not redraw again because I think they are perfect like that, and it is not out of laziness, also because I would publish them all at once, but ... I could make some minor corrections and restorations. A sequence that I really like and should not be redesigned is the dialogue between Red and William in William's room and shortly after when Mary goes to Red's room to try and seduce him. In my opinion I can find a compromise and listen to Silvador's suggestion by changing panels and reassembling them but also changing something. But I can say that the greatest difference in my style is seen in the first half of the work. Towards the second half of the chapters it was already very similar to that of now. Thank you all for your comments and suggestions!
Vanessa San
2018-07-24 17:15:53 +0000 UTCLets talk about the new page...I LOVE it! ^w^ I feel like Clyde is who we (the readers) are. We can't wait to see how this lovely story ends either Clyde. :D As for suggestions on how to migrate the old photos to the new comic: I love the ides Symphony and Silvador have came up with. ^-^ My suggestion would be to add a Albumen filter on those old comic panel, and (like Symphony suggested) have Clyde or Vanessa Io read those parts from what William told Vanessa Io. :o The Albumen filter would work because it gives that "old timey" feeling which would compliment your old artwork that is on those pages. :D But that's just my suggestion. ^_^; As always, I happy that you finished coloring page 3 and now I can't wait to see the swimsuit pin-ups~ :3
Kanbe Namura
2018-07-24 16:57:12 +0000 UTCHow about just having a panel of Clyde reading from the manuscript by William. He could simply explain in short what was written about the interview, for example. He could either be telling Vanessa what he's reading, or there could be a green text box in the panel with Clyde. Like how it's so often done in movies, where you see a person reading a letter, while you hear the voice of the person who wrote the letter.
Symphony
2018-07-23 17:24:43 +0000 UTCPerhaps rather than insert whole pages, use key panels, cropped and without colour, and add a narrative explaining what happened, rather than showing the actual dialogue. This way it can be shown as a flashback. Memories of events often get a bit exaggerated and/or skewed, so this -could- help to account for the change in style. Personally, though, I'd redraw it. For two reasons; 1. it would allow you to keep the present style and not feel the need to explain the reason behind the difference in style, something that some may see as mere laziness (regardless of whether it is or not), and 2. redrawing the scenes would allow you, as the artist, to take what you previously did and improve upon it. Perhaps you might find something about the scene you'd like to be different, their interactions, their dialogue, or even just the angles. The scene could be made shorter, or longer. My point is, you shouldn't look at redrawing an old scene as just copying it, but recreating it. Of course, what you choose to do is up to you, this is just my personal opinion and what I would do if it was me in your place.
Silvador
2018-07-23 16:53:50 +0000 UTC
