Miss Vanessa Io is the Concierge of the Delight Castle! :D
In a certain way she remains, as in the first version of the story, also the narrator of the story but in a different way that you will discover!
She not break the fourth wall, she does not summarize the previous episode anymore, she is not the author of the comic or the story, she is a character: a witness.
To be a good witness of the real facts, not being the author of a story invented by her, she must live and know everything that happens around her. Therefore she is the Concierge of Delight Castle.
And to know also what happens outside of Bon Bon, for example in the Blue Mansion or know the story of William, she is also helped by another testimony! ;)
You will know everything already in the first part of the first chapter that we can define a prologue.
I hope you will find interesting my new method of narrating this comic, which I want to make more credible, more logical, fluent, detailed and similar to a novel ^_^ ...
...and more beautiful !!!! :D
V.
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