Revisiting the Gulf Breeze UFO Sightings

Thanks for the feedback everyone!

Holden Hardman

Very impressed. Well done. I do think you can trim a bit off. Especially that Golf Course part. I think adding a timeline to the events in the beginning would really help

Jamie Tartt

It was good. Never heard of that incident before. Being a documentary I did learn a little something. The mini golf scene was a little too long. Just by a little bit. The chapter set up was a good idea, and looked good. It helps the overall flow of the film. The added clips were a good touch. It was nice seeing actual footage. I don’t really have any big complaints. It was cool to see you do a full length film. Keep them coming!

Kyle Vandever

Very entertaining. Nice touch adding Dr Greer and attempting his meditation communication technique. All the edits in that last wrap up and dramatic “BAM” when showing each pic at the beginning were only minor quibbles for me.

TurtleInJersey

Thanks so much! I'll fix what I can. Definitely the polaroid in one camera line, lol

Holden Hardman

This is what I meant with a simple timeline btw: https://i.imgur.com/qSEpG8o.png

Johan Faas

This was great! Honestly, the structure and narrative were very sound. The only "major" thing I would add (though I assume it's too late/tooo much work) is maybe a visualized timeline for the "Ed's story" chapter. You list off a lot of dates in those 13 minutes, and I feel like it would benefit from a (even very simple) timeline to visualize it all. Other tiny nitpicks I have would be: - Minigolf drags a bit - Missing subtitles at 4:13, I know you recap what he said immediately after, but he's got subtitles everywhere else in the video. - 11:55 "Has his polaroid in one camera, and his gun in the other" Beside all of that, great stuff!

Johan Faas

Hey Holden you should do more Doc videos like this man. This was so interesting and entertaining to watch! I was kinda bummed when it ended hahaha. But seriously great freaking job man!

Gerardo Vazquez

This is truly awesome my guy

I liked this and would be stoked to see you continue making full length videos like this. I watched this with my partner and noted to him that you were looking for feedback, and he mentioned the mini golf could be shortened as well. I think it adds a fun element to the video though so definitely still keep it in, but just a tad shorter. This might be a weird thing to add, but liked the part where you guys find the raccoons, haha. It's just a small funny thing but shows your personalities and friendship when you guys joke around, and I think that's a big reason why a lot of us love watching your videos. :) During Ed's Story I really liked the different video clips added in, like at 14:30. I think if more things like this could be added in (just during Ed's Story I mean) it could add some nice additional visual variation since it's a lot of info to unpack, but I do understand that this does add to the cost, whether that be something custom animated, or stock footage. Hope this feedback helps, and keep up the great work Holden!

Ashtn

To much mini golf but loved the doc. and do more of theses.

Ahmad Zain

If I had to nitpick, I think you spend a bit too long on playing mini golf. Wish you had been able to talk to the Man himself. Good job. Personally, I don't believe any UFO sighting would be alien 👽 related.

Jose Luis Balderas Ruiz

I appreciate you regardless, and love this film. Thank you

brad fedick

I'll absolutely fix it for the final. A couple others have said they havent been in the credits that I'll be adding too

Holden Hardman

Oh no I'm not in the credits. Great job Holden this was a great film. I wish I could own it on physical media.

brad fedick

Oh shit, that was sooner than I expected - I'm hyped! Not home right now but I'll watch this tomorrow and make some notes while I do, can't wait!

Johan Faas

Ohhhh shoot it’s here!

Derek Benson