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Added 2023-04-20 18:00:03 +0000 UTCContinue the conversation yourselves.
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That’s good lines there, I’ll save it for another time!
Francesco Iacolare
2023-04-21 14:27:19 +0000 UTCAnother way you might write it: "Commander, I really felt the need to discuss... something..." It keeps the same structure and is a bit more conversationally natural. Putting a pause between discuss... and something... could seem coy or playful. You could also go with a direct Mass Effect reference and say something like, "Commander, it's time for you to slap some omni-gel on me."
Quentin Corvus
2023-04-21 09:17:11 +0000 UTCNah I just made it up, thanks for the suggestion anyway, what lines of dialogue would've been more correct?
Francesco Iacolare
2023-04-21 08:55:28 +0000 UTCI did know, I was trying to be friendly and helpful. Your English is still better than many native speakers and Mass Effect does have some dialogue issues, so I thought it was possible it could have been an actual Mass Effect quote.
Quentin Corvus
2023-04-21 08:54:11 +0000 UTCEnglish is not my first language, I thought you knew.
Francesco Iacolare
2023-04-21 08:45:57 +0000 UTCAnd of course, incredible art.
Quentin Corvus
2023-04-21 08:35:10 +0000 UTCI'm not sure if it's a mass effect reference but the "about" in the quote doesn't really make sense conversationally in English.
Quentin Corvus
2023-04-21 08:34:45 +0000 UTCTrue!!
Francesco Iacolare
2023-04-20 19:13:05 +0000 UTCCan never go wrong with Mass Effect girls.
Kryptic Pixels
2023-04-20 18:02:47 +0000 UTC
