Succubus Hotel P11-P13 （' W ^）
Added 2024-10-07 15:37:51 +0000 UTCI need everyone's help with this part. Considering I'm from a non-English speaking country, I feel the character dialogues could use some of your suggestions. What do you think should be written for the following dialogue?
Please leave your suggestions in the comments! Thank you so much for your participation!
By the way, everyone can look forward to the final 3 pages! Haha!
Comments
Yeah, seems good
Mish
2024-10-07 21:25:22 +0000 UTChmmmm kinda difficult without context rough idea page 11 1. ahh god this bitch is crazy. 2: its no use just just accept it. 3: even if you call them you think they'll believe you . 4:urghh just got to reach page 12-13 not really sure what going on. but maybe in page 12 have him still fighting to get out. but in page 13 he starts accepting his fate. but have no idea what happens next so this may not make sense.
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2024-10-07 20:47:32 +0000 UTC
