KYBER-PUNK 22BBY Ch.32
Added 2025-11-05 00:14:19 +0000 UTC[Freedom and Love on Free Nar Shaddaa]
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Lucy... Yeah, I'll admit that I've kinda let her fall by the wayside. I'm just having trouble finding ways to effectively and naturally include her in the story. Right now, her romance route is kinda just a loose end from the beginning of the story, when it was still just 'Night City' in scope. Really, I think I just need to jump on it and get her 'IN', ya know? Once she's more closely tied to Atom, she can start doing more than just being one of the best netrunners the Gonks have. Otherwise, she's likely to stay floating around in the background, doing stuff but not really part of the story's focus. I do like Lucy, but at this point, I'm half wondering if it would've been better to keep the canon OTP of her and David instead of trying to force her and Atom. If you have any suggestions for how I can include her more, I'd love to hear them.
bleachballed
2025-11-05 15:11:39 +0000 UTCGreat chapter, can't wait fir Yoda to just pop up in a club enjoying him self just to spook Atom
QuantumServer
2025-11-05 14:02:38 +0000 UTC'Master Qui-Gon would’ve been ashamed' Not really. Qui-Gonn is the one who affected the dice roll to take Anakin, with no promise whatsoever to come back for her. Poor guy will never know that. One thing I find strange in this fic? Lucy. Sasha goes out of her way to have Padme let loose and join them, but you seem to have forgotten about Lucy entirely. We've got more shenanigans happening between Atom, Rebecca, Sasha, Fey, and Padme. Lucy is still there, yes, but the last time anything happen between the two is when they tagged Arasaka tower together. Beyond that, I'm glad they had fun and the shenanigans that happened was hilarious. Mighty Leia's laws is finally established. Atom gets three jedis on his side even if two are working parallel to what he does. However, I always loved those two. One thing I like at the end is where Fey tells Obiwan to drop her name when he makes his report to the council. Let's see what those morons pull then. Either way, he will do what's best for his student. Last but certainly not least? Ani's meeting with her mother. That was *extremely* wholesome. Crisis averted (or at least one of them averted). Time to see what that asshole will try to adjust the plans with everything's that going on. Next time, I guess we go for the next part of what Atom and his gonks will get up to. TFTC!
Johny5
2025-11-05 04:54:52 +0000 UTC
