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UNDER CONTROL

Remember last year, when I asked you on Patreon what my next Story should be? Yeah right, it took me some time to get this going, but I’m finally happy with part 1!

It hasn’t been properly edited yet, but I thought "Hey, it‘s Sunday and you guys deserve to see it. Finally!"

Here we go – Part 1

UNDER CONTROL

Comments

☺️☺️☺️ yeah

Max Morphs

Part 2?

Logan

I had to update the file because my editor had a look at it.

Max Morphs

Omg... I love this! I love your writing!

B

Apparently you have to request access to read this now? Is that how its suppose to be?

Roam

Love the story!! Can’t wait for the next part! ♥️♥️

Where is the view reader mode?

Definitely will. And much faster than the first part because I know where the story goes now

Max Morphs

OMG, that is an awesome story. So hot. I hope you'll write another part soon. Good job!

Godzilla6000

I did but I was on my phone. I clicked on “view reader mode” and it worked just fine.

Joe Shmoe


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