(C.M.S)Hunting
Added 2023-06-25 16:56:25 +0000 UTCAlex expected that it may take a few days for the preparations to finish and for the forward group to make their way over to this land mass. Knowing this he simply flew up into the air and began to patrol the area in order to find something to eat. It didn't take him very long either as there were two monsters nearby who both made a bit of noise simply by being there , beotodus and bambaro. Both of these monsters were about as stealthy as a snoring hog and tended to unnecessarily damage their surroundings as they traveled.-
For beotodus it was from it's scales scraping everything as it passed by while also leaving deep furrows in the snow where it went. It also didn't help that the thing hunted the popos which were strange mammoth pig creatures the size of a minivan. Beotodus itself was a terrible choice of colors for a snowbound predator as it was black and yellow with a large rhino like horn at the front of it's face. Besides this it was very similar to both the lavasioth and juratodus in the new world which Alex attributed to them being three evolutions of the same distant ancestor.-
Bambaro however was a large bipedal monster with thick fur and scales all over its body with a mix of moose and cow features making up it's face. The most notable features on the monster however were the two massive flat mooselike horns that it used to pick up dirt , snow , trees and stone to carry or directly fling at a chosen target. In terms of power the bambaro won hands both however the beotodus also had the ice element and even used it as a sort of armor over it's back.-
None of this really matter to Alex however as both were little more than dinner in his opinion and he merely had to choose which to taste first. In the end he chose the bambaro simply to see if it tasted like moose. There wasn't really even a fight as Alex dropped out of the sky onto the monsters head with a Tenshou infused stomp killing it instantly. After that he grabbed the corpse while ignoring the terrified popos and brought it back the his current residence. He knew a thing or two about butchering thanks to watching the hunters take his prey apart and put that knowledge to use to dismantle the corpse.-
First he slit the pelt and pulled it off the body before setting it to the side and working on the removing the organs without rupturing any of them. Finally it was time to separate the meat from the bones which was slightly a pain to do but Alex still managed. All that was left were the bones and head that had been crushed under his foot. Alex wasn't picky with what he ate and ate all of that as well. Cooking the meat was fairly easy as he just directly roasted it with his flames before eating it.-
Alex didn't get anything new from his meal as it was only [hard horns] and [ice resistance] which he already had. Alex passed the days by hunting or sleeping mostly as there was little more to do until the forward group arrived. It took a week and a half before he finally found Zain and the handler checking out the area. He Greeted them before bringing them back to the area he chose where they were surprised to see a huge stone building already standing near one of the hotsprings.-
They sent up a flare to let the third fleets airship know where to go before chatting with Alex about what he had found so far. It took a couple of hours for the airship to anchor itself above the area after fighting with the weather the whole way. Once here though the builders disembarked from the airship and got to work immediately. Alex could never get over how efficient the construction work in this world was as you could visibly watch the architecture spring up. All that these people needed to rebuild in little time was resources such as stone and wood.
Comments
So what do you think of my suggestion for a sequel?
THE SAVAGE KITTY
2023-06-27 04:27:11 +0000 UTCI think a good way to end this fic is to have alex reach the absolute peak of this world try to reach further beyound fail then get reincarnated in the witcher universe a few days to multiple years after he met geralt and then with all his traits but instead of him growing wheb he gets traits his body Condenses his mucles bones etc also he take an incrediblely long time to grow like takeing 10-15 years to reach 6 meters tall maybe even twenty if he gets enough traits and his body gets even denser and he reaches full maturity when he reaches his previous size while also consuming monsters from the Witcher universe that give him more traits that have to do with magic etc. I think there could be a couple different reason Alex would try to break the demi god barrier 1 he knkws its a low chance if success and will help him not become a cruel monster due to the insanity inducing bordom he will endure during his multiple thousands of years he will be alive another is that he thinks if he can break the demigod door and become divine he can enter space and start finding even more monster traits to add to his collection and leaving behind the Monster Hunter planet once he starts seeing himself become cruel and a monster to be killed in the adventures perspective. A good start for the Witcher universe could be Alex being born in a forest instead of civilization to simbilize his self Identity as a monster and him growing for like a year or two in that forest before a nearby village puts a bounty on his head due to their Ignorance and geralt taking the bounty with alex recognizing him and then they catch up etc i dont know where to go from here as i don't know much about the witchers lore but i think it would be intresting. Also alex shoukd be re-reborn in a coastline forest being born in at a similar size mabye smaller mabye bigger i think it should be smaller though but with a lot more power in his limbs like at birth he should be half as strong as a jagras as a hatchling. But as i said Alex should be growing bigger at a much smaller rate 2 m at 10-20 years old i think this should geralt should find alex when he is 6 mounths to 3 years old and 5 to 10 years before geralt meets Ciri allowing alex to get good traits and become big enough to have a somewhat significant role in the story i don't remember where you estimated what time point geralt was from but I think I choose a good point in the time line also I think Alex's "species" if thats what we want to call it should be almost invisable in the dark when their young but once they reach young adult or teen they start delveloping white spots first under the wings then all over the body then when they reach full maturity there fully white to better blend in with the sky that is now there domain as his elder dragonness is adaptation it makes sense for his "species" to grow like that. Also alex shoukd eat a werewolf and gain either a more huminoid Physique similar to were wolfs allowing him to use tools and weapons with new his Dexteritis hands also he could gain magic and that could allow him to create illusions and do stuff similar to what the golden dragon did in the witcher tv show never really being human always a monster tho some could argue that humans are the worst monsters on the planet and i would tend to agree with them but not for this novel. Alex gaining magic would be a big game changer so alex should have to work for it as while it might be considered a rare "trait" in a select few, in the overall world population it a common ability making it so alex would have to eat a certain amount of "magic" in creatures prefurablely like 10 million (As a baseline a werewolf would have 100 magic in there system) because alex would already be so overly saturated with Monster hunter energy that runs through his body so effciently that the creation of mana vains at t1 he should also only get a notification about being able to get "magic vains" at a score of 10,000 magic. I also really do not want Alex's story to end with just and alex moved away from humans because reason a-c like the orginal fic write did like you should have alex finish the plot then spend the next year or two helping the new workd stabilise and during that time finish his sublimation then he should bring up his conerns about his life span with the admiral and ask about his opinion on it while tell him he decided to try to break the barrior to godhood.(or to become a true demigod as the peak elder dragons in the monster hunter world only have the tinyest smallest sliver of divinity so small it might as well be a tenth of the size of a cell alex having his system and his sentience would allow him to see/feel the sliver and he would leave it alone for a Month or two before his body would start to feel irritated all the time and in a state of stress as Alex reached the peak of the world and the world itself wasn't letting him follow his nature of adapting to new things since doing that would push him past the peak of the world becoming a true immortalas his soul would become part energy fusing with his tiny sliver of divinity allowing Alex to keep his body and soul alive for forever unless he were to jump into a black hole which even light cannot escape. Alex with the help of his system would come to understand that to push past the world's limits he would need to preform a ritual that first bound all the energy in his body in a continous cycle for about a month never going below 50% of his total energy but a low bound to his soul then during the process of fusing the Is extraordinary amount of energy bound to his soul around 300% with another 150 percent going to his system so that it evolves with him to support "goddlyhood traits" also during thw two year arc helping the adventurers and everyone stabilize the new world alex's system should become semi-selfaware. Now during the fusing ritual the world would Intervene stopping alex from Completing the rutual causing all the energy he collected and the energy in his body to start unstavlizing and going wild in his body while the world starts to kill him but Alex's system now being semi-selfaware doesn't wan't its host to die so it sacrifices it semi-selfawareness and all the energy collected for it along with some codeing from its AI being Disintegrated but it should only really effect his insane growth spurts that happened everytime he got specific traits (the AI that comes after should compensate this by instead making his bones muscles even his brain and heart get denser in the case of his brain it would also increase the eletrical impulse speed by ×2) so his semi-selfaware system would realise even with all the energy that had been collected it still didnt have enough energy to save him and if jt were to turn His Physical Body into Energy it still wouldn't have enough so it would look at the Possibilities of what could save alex and its conclusion... death no but really it would kill alex while using all the energy that had been collected also all the energy it would gain by turning Alex's body into pure energy killing his body temporarily and sending his soul to the only other dimension/universe it has corrdinates for the witcher universe then it would send itself and alex to the witcher universe with alex in a tiny pure black egg harder to break then punching a 3 meter steel wall to make sure that alex wouldn't be killed in his egg then scene you leave us on a massive cliff hangar wondering weather alex survived the reincarnation to the witcher universe keeping us in suspence while maje like the first 5 or so cgapters of it and post them in a new book also make sure to post the new book title in the old book so people can find it. For a title I was thinking you could do something like Custom Made Monster System: Strongest monster: Witcher
THE SAVAGE KITTY
2023-06-26 08:03:30 +0000 UTCThx for the chapter
THE SAVAGE KITTY
2023-06-25 17:09:26 +0000 UTC