*Original Comic* Ch. 2, P. 6/18
Added 2023-12-08 17:07:52 +0000 UTCAh...ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
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YEARNING SO MUCH YEARNING
Vatican
2025-07-18 05:17:30 +0000 UTCA2 LOOKING AT HIM??? FROM THE MIRROR?? WHEN A1'S NOT LOOKING AT HIM?? AND THEN LOOKING AWAY WHEN A1 TURNS TO HIM?? HELLOOOOOOO AAAAAAHHHHHH
Mostlytoastie
2025-07-18 01:58:15 +0000 UTCi need a minute im actually so emotional over this 😭😭😭😭😭 dude u have no idea how much this means to meeeeeeeeeee. i love these characters and their story so much and im just trying my best to do them justice and 😭😭😭 and its like suddenly all the scrapped drafts and all the rewrites and all the … everything feels so worth it when someone like Gets It 😭😭 thank uuuu im going to keep rereading this over and over this makes me so happy 😭
Vatican
2023-12-09 07:01:05 +0000 UTCOKAY- I CAN’T HOLD IT IN- I’M GOING TO RANT AGAIN. 😤 I looked at this, I put my phone down. I had to process for a moment, I just. 🫢 I can’t recover from your subtle exposition through purely a few images and very little dialogue. We are on page SIX. JUST SIX. And yet we know SO MUCH about these characters, their personalities, their relationship, in JUST SIX. PAGES. You have no idea the power you wield, you have captivated the hearts of so many with these characters; instantly. 😭 the second panel made me feel so much?? Knowing the shower scene was coming, I knew they would be comfortable naked around each other, it’s normal. They’ve seen it all before, something about that is so intimate and beautiful. The way their dialogue is with each other is so casual, short, straight to the point, how people actually talk; which sounds like a weird observation but a lot of media I enjoy has stilted dialogue that feels clumsy, but your use of dialogue always feels purposeful (I will never get over the “hm?” “hm” NEVER. It’s my roman empire) the composition of your panels is also always perfect, you cover a lot in just a handful of images and it feels very cinematic, you create a consistent atmosphere that feels real and natural. It’s almost like a little tv show playing in my head. I remember the rant I had at “hm?” “hm” how it was more poignant and made my heart beat more than a kiss? Again THIS is so much more romantic than things we see every day, and you just GET IT. The hair washing will actually destroy me, even just the way a1 asked, “can you wash my hair” he didn’t say please, he doesn’t have to. He knows he doesn’t have to, the please is implied, they don’t use niceties with each other, they’re beyond that, they don’t need to use more words than needed, they know each other inside and out. Omg vati im so sorry its 6am after work and i cant stop agsjshshh I wish i could be more eloquent for this like you deserve
Royal
2023-12-09 06:46:11 +0000 UTC
