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Added 2024-08-03 03:14:25 +0000 UTCfirst of all thank you guys for the immense support, i really wouldnt be here without you guys so sI would like to hear your thoughts about what you'd like to see from me In general, after all, what I draw is for you guys and I'm trying to find ways to improve
if you got the time please leave a comment saying what you hope to get from my art, it could be maybe you wanna see either more pinup nudes or more intense seggs scenes, or like, if you want to see more of previous poses ive done in the past, or something i havent done yet (im very conscious about having fresh content and not repeating poses since i have this idea that drawing the same thing over and over is boring) but lmk
also if there's any specific characters or franchises you wanna see me touch upon
or even just a general comment about what you like about my art and why you support me, or what i could do better
I apreciate your thoughts!
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hey thank you so much for your (HUGE) comment, i can tell you put alot of thought into it and i really appreciate it πͺ I like your idea about dividing the characters by popularity, though I thunk I would have to restructure how I do polls, since I have polls for 3 different tiers, it would become very bloated having 6 separate polls to account for the separated characters. Genuinely warms my heart to see you're such a huge enjoyer of my shitty drawings, its comments like these that keep me going when I'm on a slump. BTW I love your pfp, as a fan if both series it's hilarious to see lmao
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2024-08-19 03:27:35 +0000 UTCSorry in advance for mucho texto. No response expected here, no hard feelings if you just wanna ignore it cuz it's too long, but hope you find the feedback helpful regardless! First and foremost: you're one of my favorite artists. I hope you can keep doing what you do for years to come :) You do your best work when you are drawing stuff you like and when you don't have a lot of pressure. I do prefer finished pieces over sketches, but what's most important is whether you stay happy and motivated long-term. I hope enough patrons agree and support you even if you decide you're not feeling a piece and leave it as a sketch. The recent re-poll incident is a good example where I hope you don't lose support over it, cuz your freedom and happiness are important to your long-term success. I definitely appreciate that you want to please your audience, of course, but I've seen a bunch of artists get sick of the public artist lifestyle because they take a hit to their follower count if they don't keep delivering what people have come to expect from them. For my part, at least, I'll support you through any "training arcs" (so to speak) where your output decreases in the short term but it leads to you becoming more skilled and/or prolific in the long term. I know one guy saying that barely counts for anything; you need way more than just my patronage in order to make a living. Still, I can only hope that most of your other fans already think the same as me, or will read what I wrote and will expand their views a bit, since ultimately it's better if we view ourselves as patrons of the arts and not as paying customers. It's the way the world should ideally work, after all: having more artists who aren't tied to an employer's obligations means better variety and higher quality for the world to enjoy. Those of us who have the means should pitch in to help make reality come closer to that ideal. Fingers crossed. Putting the idealism aside, I'll also give some practical feedback about the way you run your patreon, and a little bit about your art itself, just in case you find it valuable. 1. Poll results diversity: like you mentioned in an off-hand comment a while ago, the patrons have gotta branch out their media exposure fr. Even if we suggest characters that you personally find interesting, if they're not from a franchise owned by big N, a popular gacha game, or a couple outliers (AR, KH, SK in particular,) there's no shot they're winning the poll. So, it would be cool if you did something where you separated characters into leagues based on how many tags they have on danbooru or whatever, so that you could force a little breadth on the patrons' tastes. E.g. if you normally draw 3 characters from a poll of 12, maybe try splitting the poll into a "mainstream league" poll where you have the 8 or so characters with the most tags on danbooru and you draw the 2 winners from there, and then a "niche league" poll for the remaining chars who have the least tags, with 1 winner from there. So 2 "mainstream" chars and 1 "niche" (relatively speaking) chars get drawn. It should expand your current followers' horizons and might even get you noticed by some smaller, more insular fanbases that you normally wouldn't reach. 2. Executive overrides on the polls: I actually like when you say you decided draw a character that didn't win a poll, just cuz you just wanted to. I imagine it means you're enjoying yourself more. But, it'd be neat if you announced it up front and took that character out of the poll so that it didn't affect the results at all. Just as a way to set expectations. 3. Helping people learn to be happier with poll lineups that don't include their suggestions: if you're comfortable doing so, I think you should tell people what about the poll characters you find appealing or what made you interested enough to pick them. Two reasons for this: first, it would both help people feel more positive about the results, cuz it sets a positive tone. Second, it would also help them understand your own tastes better so that they can suggest stuff you're more likely to find interesting in the future. And these are more points of feedback on the art itself. 1. I like that there's currently a good mix of body types between petite and curvy chars. I prefer curvy but most people get sick of cake if they eat it every day. I just hope you don't ever skew too hard towards mostly petite body types, not just cuz of my personal preferences, but also because it'll draw the gaze the eye of sauron (puritanical credit card companies.) Basically I'm just saying mostly stay the current course, it's good! 2. It's nice that you recently brought it back with the Koharu piece, but FWIW the first piece from you that I ever saw was either Mythra or Nia wearing the cat paw gloves from years ago. The cute-but-naughty gap moe is *chef's kiss* especially when paired with a tail plug. Works on basically any body type and character personality, everything from embarrassed/tsundere types to seductive/mature types. Sets you up for a lot of diverse poses and angles like all fours, begging, you get the idea. Same kinda goes for bunny girls tbh. I hope you will draw more of that kind of thing; you pull it off really well and it checks off a bunch of boxes for me personally. 3. I think you've gotten better over time at dynamic poses and angles, and I hope you'll continue to work on them, especially if you find them fun to draw! Especially action poses, high-flexibility poses like splits or other "bedroom gymnastics" type stuff, bird's-eye or worm's-eye views, and forced perspectives. They're just visually interesting IMO. Again, sorry for mucho texto, but I figured better give all my thoughts in case any are helpful, cuz worst case scenario is you lose interest reading this and all I did was waste an hour and change typing it. As always, I'm wishing you well and cheering you on.
drew
2024-08-19 00:08:10 +0000 UTCLove your art. Keeping doing what you do best. I think the only thing I'd like to see more of is more variation on body types. With how well you draw anatomy I would love to see you draw some muscle mommies or plump girls
primevil17
2024-08-05 20:26:11 +0000 UTCHonest thoughts +top tier face and colouring game literally main reason why im happy to keep sending u money +very good at conveying motion/kinetic energy +good variety of poses +good artist attitude tbh +OCs are neat +Namine fan :) -can get a little disheartening seeing nintendo girls win all top 3 slots however i fully understand thats the nature of polls + fanbases -it is after a while noticable to tell the work you liked doing vs the work which was crunched out due to obligations even with/without the defined/less defined winners, again understand this is the nature of paywalls -Aqua denier >:(
Mack Harris
2024-08-04 13:14:58 +0000 UTCI really love the way you do your shading and the anatomy of every piece. You can always make poses look really distinctive and sell the "scene" even when it's just a basic sex shot. As far as wishes go, I'm not too picky when it comes to who gets chosen (though I'm a fairly basic fan of most Nintendo/2000s anime stuff), but I will say that I love butt-focused shots and thighjobs. Also your OC stuff is really solid, I think the designs are awesome and I hope you get to show off what you want with them at some point.
Richie Bolles
2024-08-04 06:29:42 +0000 UTCI'd like more intense seggs scenes. I love the way you creatively tie in stuff from the source material, like the UI from smash bros or the palutena pit boxart. Also more palutena/pit.
MrPoppyPenguin
2024-08-03 20:45:21 +0000 UTCI'd like to see more pinups, not that there aren't already some great ones, but they're my fav. Also more non-penetrative sex scenes like boobjobs and blowjobs would be nice! I'm outspoken against seeing the same old nintendo girls time and time again but I get it, they're always popular, but I REALLY like your original characters. Plus, I love gacha characters so it's not like I'm one to talk lol. But also yes Nicole from ZZZ would be perfect from you...
colormute
2024-08-03 15:59:38 +0000 UTCI think maybe incorporating backgrounds into more of your art would be nice, Cause whenever you do do a full illustration with a background it looks gorgeous
AC12
2024-08-03 09:14:48 +0000 UTCDoesn't hurt to try a poll at least once I suppose. I also prefer thiccer body types anyway, so I'd have no qualms with you cherry picking 2hus that are commonly depicted as such (Patchouli is excellent btw. I'm a Yuyuko guy myself while also heavily enjoying seeing Sakuya in heels). The cast is well known to be huge, so there's a lot to pick from. On top of which, fan work has always been very flexible, so you could easily get away with aging up some characters' bodies anyway. But I also completely understand respecting varied body types and their consistency in common depictions. What you choose to do is entirely up to you at the end of the day.
Vinjok
2024-08-03 08:52:21 +0000 UTCI don't play guilty gear ive been hoping someone would commission ramlethal jackO or elphelt since forever but alas, no luck
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2024-08-03 08:47:56 +0000 UTCThank you! I do consider faces my strongest area. Its always the first thing I draw since in my case, I cannot continue working on the drawing untill the face looks just like how I want it
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2024-08-03 08:19:19 +0000 UTCon the incomplete sketches bit,i'd like to maybe do a poll to decide wich ones get fully detailed, i just dont know if you guys would be fine with that since they've already seen it before. as for touhou, half of the cast are l0lis so I'd have to cherry pick em, tho I do like Patchouli alot. Thank you for your comment!
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2024-08-03 08:14:18 +0000 UTCtharja is the only body stocking i know tbh :0
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2024-08-03 08:07:45 +0000 UTCthat's a fair point, the reason i do them nude is that it's faster to finish them on a montly crunch, specially when most of the characters i tend to do have overly complicated designs/armor, just look at anything from xenoblade and you'll understand lol
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2024-08-03 08:07:00 +0000 UTCoh also one more thing I realized after looking through some of the rewards ive gotten. You draw facial expressions really well! I know that kinda goes hand & hand with the art style but as I was looking through the images thats what really stood out to me the most. For example in the latest rewards the little Ryza wip you posted, despite it being a rough draft you truly nailed her expression and I think thats what really sells me on your art.
Flaming
2024-08-03 06:58:48 +0000 UTCPersonally I really love your art style. For characters I dont really have too strong of an opinion on I still enjoy the art because of how well its drawn and for characters I do enjoy it works wonders for them. I know nintendo girls are pretty popular around here and dont get me wrong I love them too but I also enjoy your pieces on anime gals and other franchises (The Konosuba works from a couple months ago spring to mind but that just might be my Konosuba bias talking lol). As for poses and stuff I feel like you got a good mix of them going on and I dont really see a problem with them.
Flaming
2024-08-03 06:49:24 +0000 UTCI like seeing a little clothing. I'm not saying fully covered, but fully nude can be a little boring.
Pat
2024-08-03 06:13:15 +0000 UTCLove the work, hoping for more pinups that not just bikinis. personally I like body stocking myself
randeep kang
2024-08-03 06:11:38 +0000 UTCI definitely think you nail anatomy in your art. Just about every body type you've drawn has been undeniably sexy. When I take a quick look back through the rewards I've gotten so far, I don't think the pinup to sex ratio is all that imbalanced. It CAN feel like there's a LOT of sketches that still have the potential to be great if given the chance to be finished, or even given a rough background, though. It can also feel like a lot of the sexual artwork has been mostly penetrative, so I wouldn't mind seeing some more non-penetrative stuff like boobjobs, buttjobs, thighjobs etc. Also, backshot pieces could do with some POV compositions so we can really appreciate those asses rippling ;). I also personally like external cumshots and feel like there could be more of those too. On the franchises front, I've seen you draw some Touhou before and personally would love to see more of that too, but that might just be me. I'm otherwise perfectly okay with your current output of franchises.
Vinjok
2024-08-03 06:03:05 +0000 UTCThatβs fair, I was just throwing out examples of different βjobsβ. Footjob would be great, and yes I have seen some funny twitter censorsing
jlxp
2024-08-03 05:38:10 +0000 UTCI love how expressive your art is, the body, proportions and compositions are great! I'm a fan of both the OC and series contents and dem intense seggs you draw as well * v * It's no wonder I follow you for all these goodies lol
Jun
2024-08-03 05:10:04 +0000 UTCIf I'm being honest boobjobs are a bit boring to me, something about just drawing a torso giving a boobjob feels like its missing something so it would have to have an interesting angle or something like that, that being said, I do have an Uzaki Tsuki that i teased a few months ago sitting there. footjobs i'll deffinetely look into, it'll be funny to censor it for twitter lol
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2024-08-03 05:05:52 +0000 UTCI'm a huge fighting game fan so more Guilty Gear and Blazblue would be cool
MF Viewtiful
2024-08-03 05:04:48 +0000 UTCIf it were up to me id only draw my ocs but its still a ways off until I can survive just off them alone lol
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2024-08-03 04:57:35 +0000 UTCsomeone actually wants to commission the mechanic girl but I'm not super sure, the only one i REEEEALLY like is the main pink hair girl so we'll see if I take it
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2024-08-03 04:55:30 +0000 UTCI love seeing you indulge in your OCs and I'll say this, the best art comes from the impulse of seeing it drawn. Whether it waifu of the week taking backshots, OC shenanigans, or a pure messy experiment. Follow it always
Kodiak
2024-08-03 04:46:07 +0000 UTCTwo of my favorite things about your art are 1. the right balance of realism to make anime style characters look extra good and 2. thick pubes. I also like your OCs and would like to see more of them. I also wouldn't mind seeing different action like boobjob/footjob (all the jobs).
jlxp
2024-08-03 04:25:57 +0000 UTCZenless Zone Zero came out not long ago why not try making one of the characters?
AbyssVane
2024-08-03 04:20:54 +0000 UTCCould you draw Ramdaram from λλ€λ underfity? I love your art for how detailed it is!
TrevorFal
2024-08-03 03:58:32 +0000 UTCWelp love your stuff
Noe Robles
2024-08-03 03:38:09 +0000 UTCGoogle is your friend :)
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2024-08-03 03:36:45 +0000 UTCCan I see an aqua kindom hearts
Noe Robles
2024-08-03 03:34:19 +0000 UTC
