Party Crasher
Added 2025-10-10 01:58:50 +0000 UTCTrick or treat? π
Treat! A surprise short story for you!
βParty Crasher" is about what happens when a college costume scheme goes sideways... and somehow, perfectly right.
Enjoy! π
Comments
Thank you, Alex!
Emory Ahlberg
2025-10-22 22:59:01 +0000 UTCFable? This could happen to anyone! π
Emory Ahlberg
2025-10-22 22:58:51 +0000 UTCA fun little fable :-) x
stacy C
2025-10-21 22:33:37 +0000 UTCThank you so much, Robert! Hope your fall is going well. ππ
Emory Ahlberg
2025-10-18 22:51:29 +0000 UTCThank you very much, Hel! As for the trick... it may be when you least expect it! Haha. π
Emory Ahlberg
2025-10-18 22:51:01 +0000 UTCWhen you can pull of the "girl" look as if you've been secretly practicing for years... π
Emory Ahlberg
2025-10-18 21:02:20 +0000 UTCHehe, it's not everyone's cup of tea. Glad you liked the story, Maggie!
Emory Ahlberg
2025-10-18 21:01:46 +0000 UTCπ»π»π» Thank you, Ella!
Emory Ahlberg
2025-10-18 21:01:17 +0000 UTCThank you, Kris! I thought a "treat" might be nice π
Emory Ahlberg
2025-10-18 21:01:06 +0000 UTCAw - thank you very much, Diana! π»
Emory Ahlberg
2025-10-18 21:00:22 +0000 UTCShe really would! Although would she stay a blonde? π€
Emory Ahlberg
2025-10-18 21:00:01 +0000 UTC"if only" carries a lot of weight, Bella π
Emory Ahlberg
2025-10-18 20:59:39 +0000 UTCSuch a beautiful story, my muse. And the art is great, as always.
Alex From the Tri-Cities
2025-10-11 16:08:24 +0000 UTCMagnifique, Nolwenn! π
Robertlouis
2025-10-11 13:40:32 +0000 UTCFinally the question is, was it a treat or a trick? Funfact, in french "une trique" ( said as a trick) means a boner, and" bonheur" ( said as boner) means happiness. So you can say the trick leads to happiness π
Nolwenn
2025-10-11 10:27:48 +0000 UTCGreat vignette, Emory, and as others have said, a sweet surprise too. Thank you. xx
Robertlouis
2025-10-11 04:01:52 +0000 UTCThis was adorable, and the short format is a delight. I adore longer-form media, as you know, but this was a fantastic surprise. So the real question becomes, if this is the treat, where's the trick?
Helena Grace
2025-10-11 01:46:16 +0000 UTCπ€£ God, youβre right. Missed opportunity! Thank you, Ellen!
Emory Ahlberg
2025-10-10 21:31:29 +0000 UTCThat was really fun and sweet. Although obviously, she should have ended up with Cassie...
Ellen Mellor
2025-10-10 21:26:34 +0000 UTCAh the sweetness!! Not to mention my own fond memories of doing this sort of thing right after high school and getting the reactions of, "is that really you??"
SingularCurve
2025-10-10 20:17:59 +0000 UTCUsually I am not a Halloween enjoyer but this... this is an obvious exception β£οΈβ£οΈβ£οΈ
Maggie Heels
2025-10-10 13:45:19 +0000 UTCSpookily cute π
Ella Cherry
2025-10-10 11:12:03 +0000 UTCWhat a sweet October surprise.
Kris Greg
2025-10-10 09:55:35 +0000 UTCGreat short story and amazing art! But who would expect anything less from you?
Diana O'Neil
2025-10-10 03:32:39 +0000 UTCDiana, Second that emotion!
Diana O'Neil
2025-10-10 03:27:37 +0000 UTCπ€π€π€ Thank you, Alyson! π
Emory Ahlberg
2025-10-10 03:12:35 +0000 UTCWe can make it real, Amber - we just have to believe! π lol
Emory Ahlberg
2025-10-10 03:12:15 +0000 UTCOkay, I freaking loved this story, adorable and heartwarming. Killed it again with the art as per yuz. Pls madam can I have some more. π₯Ίπ
Diana
2025-10-10 02:42:39 +0000 UTCJill would make a great Elvira for the Halloween Pin-up.
Tiki D
2025-10-10 02:27:46 +0000 UTCNice little short story. If only, if onlyβ¦
Bella Lime
2025-10-10 02:14:36 +0000 UTCShe has to clean her room first lol
Emory Ahlberg
2025-10-10 02:12:51 +0000 UTCOh yeah, she is joining that sorority. 100%.
Holly B.
2025-10-10 02:10:36 +0000 UTCas I just said elsewhere, this slaps HARD
Alyson Greaves
2025-10-10 02:07:43 +0000 UTCThis is great, I wish halloween was real
Amber Caledonia
2025-10-10 02:06:30 +0000 UTC
