You Write the Caption!
Added 2023-07-16 04:16:30 +0000 UTCHello, Patrons!
I'm excited for our very first "You Write the Caption" event! This is your chance to let your imagination run free, and to allow me to bring your story to life.
Here's how it works:
You're invited to comment below with your unique story idea. This can be as brief or as detailed as you wish - including up to the full story, if you're so inclined.
Feel free to explore any genre, setting, or emotion. The only rules? 600 words max and all characters depicted must be 18+.
Now for the fun part: once you've posted your story or caption idea, other patrons will have the chance to "like" your submission. A simple click on the heart ❤️ is all it takes to cast a vote.
The story or idea with the most "likes" by July 25 will be declared as the winner!
I can't wait to read your submissions. Best of luck!
Comments
I hope you feel better, Elrod! ❤️ Sounds like a very interesting story.
Emory Ahlberg
2023-07-24 22:11:38 +0000 UTCI have an idea that could be done in multiple images, telling a complete yet short story of corruption and conspiracy, forced conversion under fear of prison rape, Cell Block T with the other Gurls, working in a special job while incarcerated, then parole to a 'halfway house' - that continues that work - and the realization of just how much corruption the innocent guy was the victim of. Alas, my muse won't get much more than a very rough outline - extreme pain from a badly damaged knee has my mind quite a bit foggy, and even typing this much ... yeah, longer isn't going to work until after surgery. Oh, well. Maybe I can make a full graphic story out of it.
Elrod W
2023-07-23 00:15:50 +0000 UTCEmory, can I use my What if ideas for Jack and Jill for the caption? If accepted, here are my three ideas: (1) What if Jack and Mason switch positions (Jack working for Xu and Dr. Mason being the victim)? Jack (Not Jill in this timeline) got hired by Xu as a handler due an open job opportunity on Xu's Island. He doesn't want to work on the island, but check out the ladies. Months earlier, Dr. Mason noticed that his lab is empty and message from Xu played on TV. He wanted his Super Hormones project, which was a success on Jason, shared his project with other upper doctors in Xu's department. Xu rewards Mason with a "taste of his own medicine" by Davis knocking Mason and inject him his Super Hormones serum. Then takes him to a farmilar cell (Jack's cell from the original timeline). This timeline would similar to the early chapters of 1-4, like Jack checking out Mason/Pre-Melissa beauty and body. He also gets to know her and trying her scientific mind. Davis would try touch Melissa's body, but Jack stand for her. Davis would push him out of the way, but Jack would grab and tumble down with Melissa into the lake. On lake surface, Jack would accidentally touch Melissa's breast, who would be turned on, but uncomfortable at the same time. Their feelings would reach ahead during the shower scene. They would both check out their bodies from a distance. Instead of being awkward about it (like Jack/Pre-Jill was in the original timeline), Mason/Pre-Melissa felt Jack's muscles and wants to make out with, but was interrupted by Davis from the speaker for Jack to come the office. Mason/Pre-Melissa gave Jack a kiss on the mouth and would wait for him. (2) What if Conner was captured instead of Jack? Conner is a offered a "vacation" to the mainland by his General of the US Army for his "hard work". The General and Xu from behind the scenes made a deal involving Super Hormones project and by selling Conner to Xu to be tested. They disguised this plan as "Conner 's Vacation". They know how Connor is smooth with the ladies and sent Davis to his "Wing man" along with Josie (who takes Holly's role and a complete transformed Joey) to lure him to Xu's Island. On the island, Holden (who didn't turn into Holly and worked as Xu's Handlers due budding relationship between Xu and his father) would be Connie's handler and overtime would develop feelings for her. Josie would develop a sisterly bond with Connie and teased her about her feelings for Holden. Overtime, Conner would tried to escape numinous time, but fail and would come to have feelings for Holden and Josie. Emily, Jack (who is not Jill yet in this timeline. He is his male self), and Dr. Mason (who was fired by Xu due getting his research data from him) would have teamup with Janelle (still a transform Jason from Dr. Mason's experiments) to save Conner before he's too far gone. Jack would probably act like Conner due not believing Janelle's story of being Jason at first. Jack would tried to flirt with Janelle, but would not fall for his "chams". He would be capture by Connie at some point during her Girls Night Out. (3)What if Jack/Pre-Jill did escape from Chapter 3 without Xu and his forces to stop him/her? He/She would take their boat and made it to the mainland. It would be difficult for Jack/Pre-Jill to adapt outside the mainland due to guys trying hit him/her, but run away due to her talking like a guy. Tries to hit on girls, Jack/Pre-Jill would find him/her weird, not just their voice, mannerisms, and body, but some would leave or lesbians would try to have sex him/her , but would find it uncomfortable. Jack would eventually find Madison ((ex-girlfriend) unaware that she for works for Xu in this timeline). At first, she would find it strange for her former boyfriend has a woman body, but sees that he needs help and goes to Madison's house. Since Madison as connections to Xu, He would used this to his advantage by puppeteering Jack/Pre-Jill self-discovery by sending Holly to Madison's location assist his transition from man and woman sort of like a Girls Night Out. Then he would have of his special doctors, besides Mason, trick him to think he could go back to being his male self, but reinforce Jack's body structure to full female, both face, body, and mind (psychology reeducation of female mind) which Jack's mind would be surpress within the mind of Jill. Jill, once released, would have some of her formal life, but only a speck of Jack's screaming from within. Jill would experience headaches, but struggs it off and returns to the island with Holly and waves bye to her BFF Madison. She and Holly return to island to prepare for the dinner. (I manage to re imagine Chapters 3(After the shower with Mason and meeting Xu for the first time in his office), 4,5,6 and 7 (combine) (Holly's tale(Madison, who takes on a twist of Mason's role, that Jack thinks that she going help him escape, but Xu already got to her. She and Holly team-up to "help" Jack enbrace be a woman, Jill. As well as taking Jack to Xu's speical doctors) From the makeover and female training to Jill's mainland chapters (unlike those chapters, Jill would embrace her inner woman instead of have second thoughts in her head). Mason and Emily would had trouble finding Jack/Jill. They would learn from Janelle, who told Emily that Jack has changed, but would not Emily from save him.
Tiki D
2023-07-22 05:13:12 +0000 UTCA bee sting triggers a teenager's chimerical genetics (he carries both female and male genetic traits), changing his gender and appearance slowly to female but for his male organs. He's left with the choice of whether to have surgery to restore his male appearance or complete the transformation. (and of course we all know what he secretly wants, right...?)
M Fielding
2023-07-20 22:44:17 +0000 UTCFollowing allegations of assault and sexual touching, an airline forces a flight commander to become a sexy hostess!
Erica Rost
2023-07-20 04:46:23 +0000 UTC19 year old Arabella, as she is forced to go by now, is running for her life after escaping from imprisonment and a sentence to be burned at the stake for witchcraft by the church. In a setting similar to Salem, Massachusetts during the witch trials, her only company is 27 year old Samuel Mason who was also imprisoned and is the reason they were both able to escape. Arabella used to be Abner Carpenter, a spunky and nosey kid, who was snooping around the property of Agnis Henderson. Agnis was an odd one and many were beginning to suspect her of witchcraft since strange tragedies began to fall on the townsfolk. Those suspicions were actually right, as Abner found out when he was the target of a feminizing spell with diabolical intention. The transformation was a quick one and complete, designed to humiliate the proud and confident Abner. It was also quite flashy and bright, drawing the attention of others who bore witness. To them it appeared that Arabella was the witch and had been shapeshifting into Abner to infiltrate the people and wreak havoc in their lives. Arabella was arrested and imprisoned. All seemed hopeless until Samuel was able to free her. The two have formed an uneasy alliance as they aren’t totally sure than can trust one another yet. They cling to each other for support as they bond and continue forward on the run. They discover that a fearsome bounty hunter named Gustav has been hired to find them. They’re going to need a lot of luck eluding him and tracking down Agnis to undo the spell. They’re going to need guts! They’re also going to need your vote! ❤️
Estacia
2023-07-19 01:26:55 +0000 UTCHere is the link. Hope you guys like my caption. I also added the full 556 word text. https://www.patreon.com/posts/86262413
Alex From the Tri-Cities
2023-07-18 03:35:02 +0000 UTCSummer Chastity Crowe (#123) & Faith Autumn Crawford (#124) finished their daily regimen of lessons, pills & injections that have been a staple of their misery here on this island owned by the accursed Second Dawn. They; along with two other "girls" were personally selected by Mr. Xu himself as "advanced prototypes" who took to their training far better than even Mr. Xu himself dared to hope or expect. It took them 6-9 months where as Jill, Mr. Xu other pride & joy took almost three years. There was something in their genes after all, that made the process so much faster and more complete. Their psychological transformation is what really impressed the psychologists, toymakers and others in Xu's employ. Doctor Mason had been in charge of their transformations; just like he had been in charge of Jill's transformation; both mental and physiological. This much to the chagrin of Dr. Elizabeth Hatcher, who had been the first medical professional hired by Second Dawn, before there even was a Second Dawn as it exists and is understood now. Mason had not just fallen out of favor with Mr. Xu, he had actually turned traitor and somehow he was still alive. At first Chastity, Faith, along with the other two "girls" named Charity and Hope feared that Xu and the others members of the Second Dawn would order all the "girls"/"toys" killed in order to cover his tracks and that of the disgusting sadistic, perverted, ultra-rich elites that formed the Second Dawn. But it would seem that they worried for nothing as word spreads quickly in this...place...that was this island that Dr. Mason had been recaptured...somehow...and would be brought to the island momentarily. Chastity, Charity, Hope and Faith were all well above average in their I.Q and all from deeply conservative Christian households. As such they were torn between their Christian duty to forgive their tormentors & human nature; the desire to see their tormentors punished and suffering like they were made to suffer...or even worse. Dr. Mason had been in charge of their feminization and their castrations, after which; sore and mentally traumatized by just what had happened their were taken to the office of Mr. Xu. Over green tea laced with the Second Dawn's own patented non-addictive, non-opioid based painkiller, the girls were solemnly told that they would not be separated or sold, but rather "given away" as "gifts" to a woman of Mr. Xu's choosing. That woman would be Dr. Elizabeth Hatcher. In his own creepy, paternalistic and possessive way, Mr. Xu also menaced them with harming their loved ones. As the news of Dr. Mason's recapture spread, the girls humbly requested an audience with Mr. Xu, asking him to let them witness or assist in Dr. Mason's exemplary punishment. They expected punishment or privileges taken away but Xu said yes as Chastity's brown eyes shone with the glint of a sharp blade...or scalpel, soon to be dripping with blood. In this battle; a part of a never ending war, really; between Christian duty to forgive and desire for vengeance, it would seem that vengeance had won categorically and without question. The girls had no grudge against Holly; who was forced to do this against her will; but they utterly hated Mason for so many reasons, chiefly among them growing a conscience too late. (556 words give or take my muse.)
Alex From the Tri-Cities
2023-07-18 03:33:59 +0000 UTCI can suggest some stories i like ver much , like the sisters of athernia which is pretty erotic and the autor died and can be continued. And other one is mrs. Hollinworth project veryy good as well
Digi2288
2023-07-17 19:23:34 +0000 UTCThis is a summarized version of one of the captions I wrote that could make for a fun caption in Emory's style, and with the right spin, could technically take place in the Second Dawn universe: "A Brotherly Bride" After having the bridal party clear out of the room once the bride had been prepared for her wedding, the bride and her sister, the maid of honor, are left alone. While the maid of honor fixes the bride's hair, they talk about the wedding and the circumstances surrounding it. It turns out that the beautiful bride used to be a man. Their father had made mistakes and owed money to a powerful organization. Because he couldn't pay them back, the head of the organization said that he was going to take the man's daughter and have her marry one of his sons. The father agreed to give his daughter up, but when the organization came to collect, they took his son instead, cryptically insisting that he didn't have a son, but instead had two daughters with nobody to carry on his family name. They kept the son in a private estate and treated him like a woman, pumping him with specialized female hormones, dressing him in feminine clothes, and eventually having him undergo a few key surgeries. They had an entire team dedicated to feminizing him and even forced his own sister to become one of his "handmaids" as another form of psychological punishment, forcing her to assist in feminizing her own brother and helping him adjust to life as a woman. The wedding bells chime to mark the beginning of the ceremony, bringing them both back into the moment and realizing that the former brother was about to officially become a wife. The sisters hug with teary eyes, trying to lighten the mood. Soon, the former man walks down the aisle, looking and feeling very much like a blushing bride as she's escorted shamefully by her father. She sees her handsome soon-to-be husband waiting for her at the altar with a sly smile on his face.
Cryofly
2023-07-17 14:41:53 +0000 UTC“Hero’s aren’t Gods” - A cocky superhero has been too busy to notice his girlfriend. Not only has he ignored her, but he also doesn’t bother to help with the mundane chores. Because of this she has teamed-up with her boyfriend’s nemesis. They jump the hero, and then feminize him. He become she, and is now a henchmen for his nemesis. Not only that, but she and her girlfriend are now dating him.
Alex Boxall
2023-07-17 05:37:00 +0000 UTCI’m going with a classic tale with a transgender twist - The Sorcerer’s Apprentice by Dukas, which people will know from Disney’s Fantasia. In this version the sorcerer metes out his punishment on his apprentice not only by having him clear up the mess, but by using a mix of magic and hormones to feminise the youth. So you’ve got fantasy, magic, humour, transformation and a classical music earworm. What’s not to like?
Robertlouis
2023-07-17 01:23:36 +0000 UTC“I’ll never forgive him.”: a story of redemption A man makes a wish to learn to finally forgive his enemy who wronged him. The wish is granted, but not in the way he expected. He discovers that he becomes increasingly feminine the more bitter he feels toward his rival. This leads to a spiral where his inability to forgive leads to him becoming more feminine which leads to him becoming more bitter. Eventually, he is unrecognizable as a man at all, and this is when he truly accepts who he was and who he has become. He acknowledges the faults he himself committed as a man and his own need for redemption and forgiveness. This is the avenue for him extending a second chance to his old enemy. He finally learns to forgive the one who wronged him, thus fulfilling his wish. He gets a second life as a newly formed woman.
Matt Lange
2023-07-16 17:06:36 +0000 UTCJake enjoyed life on credit! He always had the latest model cell phone, played the latest game titles. He had the latest model electric bicycle, yes, he definitely liked living on credit, only he did not like paying it back later! Unfortunately, he only paid the minimum payment so as not to lose his favorite toys. However, an opportunity arose for someone to pay off his credit, but there was a catch. They wouldn't tell him over the phone. When he got there, he was told that if he agreed to spend a year in a center for shopaholics 😉, then the matter of credits would be settled. He asked about this catch in the agreement: "Am I going to find out now?" asked Jake - "Oh, you'll find out sooner or later" he smiled mysteriously! It turned out that in exchange for paying off the debt, Jake would be feminized. That was the catch. A year later, there was no more Jake with debts, and the beautiful Jane appeared with a clean slate. "Jane, you have developed very nicely," said the director of the center, "a beautiful 20-year-old lady who could stay with us." "Thank you for the compliment," Jane replied. "I think it's time for me to go." "You can go, but I think with your appetite for money we will meet again soon, why wait? Stay with us!" - he said. "Appetite for money had Jake," - replies Jane, "he is gone, I'm just looking for a way to live". "Stay with us, you won't have to look." - And so ends the story of debt-ridden Jake, who became Jane, who became the best debt collector. No knee-breaking, just debt redemption, who in return agreed to feminize! P.S. Im not an American young adult (my life doesn't round about big breasts, anime and games from time from to time). I hope that the fact that English is not my native language will not be an obstacle and my short story will appeal. I play games occasionally, and i don't need to have the latest equipment , not to have the oldest😉🤔.
Wojtek
2023-07-16 11:33:27 +0000 UTCThis is the story of a thirty-year old womanizer. One day, he decided to see a psychologist as he had been suffering from a depression for few months without knowing the reason. What he did not know, was that the psychologist was a woman he slept with few years ago. The psychologist saw in this situation a good opportunity to get her revenge : she told him that he suffered from depression because he unconsciously wanted to be a woman. The womanizer believed her, and he decided to take feminine hormones and to undergo surgeries. One year later, the former womanizer got her sex reassignment surgery, the psychologist's revenge is now complete as the womanizer is now a beautiful and feminine woman.
B.B
2023-07-16 10:40:52 +0000 UTCFirst of all sorry for any grammar mistakes or typos. English is not my native language and I wrote it under the impulse... Let's gooo... I have an idea inspired by a movie and series called "weird science" but with a little twist... ok so my idea is that: a very deeply closeted transgirl [in a shell of overweight, hairy typical IT nerd], a successful hacker thinks she'll be able to sculp her perfect body as an avatar for use in games... she installed just recently 8x RTX 8090 Ti in her personal CUDA farm... "Hey welcome Unreal Engine 8... finally I can render how I would like to see myself..." after couple hours and couple liters of coffee her masterpiece sculpture was complete... but... also there was a huge thunderstorm... and guess what... 5G antenna was hit by a lightning... CUDA farm blew out with huge, loud and bright blast... After some time our "girl inside" is waking up... looking around and starts to cry because her CUDA farm is a pile of melted crap... she reaches out her hand to point to it and then something weird happens... spark from her fingers go to that pile of melted metal and it starts to remold itself... after few seconds it looks like brand new... "WHAT THE FUCK!!!" is this a dream? she decides to pinch herself and for some weird reason she decided to pinch herself in right nipple... and she squeeks and moans in very girly voice... "WHAT THE FUCK!!!" out loud this time... She find a mirror on inside door of the closet and jaw drops... she's looking exactly like her sculpture from the screen at the moment before the lightning... but a few moments later she realizes that the look is not everything that happened... because she was naked she thought about sexy clothes that she could be wearing and at the blink of an eye clothes layered her beautiful body and this caused another jaw drop... but this time followed with a most confident grin on her face she ever had in her life...
Maggie Heels
2023-07-16 09:07:37 +0000 UTCGoing with a classic, a star quarterback struggling to recover after an injury decides to take hormones: he asks his friend and teammate to procure them for him, but the friend buys him estrogen instead.
Zoe Storm
2023-07-16 08:35:22 +0000 UTCAlan stared at the aisle in front of him, feeling his father’s arm entwined with his own. For a moment he wondered how he got to this point, wondering if he should run away and end the act. Only 5 years earlier Alan had been a college kid, just an average gay student, who developed a crush on his slightly older teaching assistant, Michael. But Michael dated a girl named Heather. Alan had been stupidly drunk when he sent a message on the college intranet, announcing he was trans. He figured he could just dress a bit more feminine and then he’d somehow win over Michael. After that everything snowballed. At first it was simply using slightly more feminine clothes, but encouraged by his new friends, he somehow ended up going to planned parenthood and starting HRT. But he told himself he could always stop. Alan’s parents had simply accepted it at face value. They already knew their son was gay and effeminate, so as his mom had said, ‘it’s not that big a surprise, and son or daughter, we’ll always love you.” However a year later Michael and Heather broke up and Alan swooped in. They started dating and Alan figured they’d have fun for the rest of college and then he could go back to being a guy. Yet after college they moved in together and Alan fell deeper into the deception, because Michael was straight. The name change to legally become Alanna and the marker as female in his passport and drivers license. Laser treatments to remove unwanted body hair and the sparse beard. Each step a part of him told that he needed to stop. But he could not lose Michael and if he somehow stopped it would upset his parents, who had been so wonderful and supportive. Implants could be removed. Facial femininization would be subtle and when going back, it would not be that bad. Getting the snip was a major step. However Alan had never really been interested in being the top and in gay lingua was purely a bottom. So he didn’t really need ‘the junk’ for anything. And then came the proposal, the wedding planning and Alan finally realized he had crossed a point of no return, possibly a long time ago. He sighed as he rubbed his legs together and felt the emptiness, a wedding present from his parents. It was during recovery, unable to really perform his ‘fiancee’ duties that he and Michael had spent time looking at porn. It was then he realized that some of the videos and images were of men and questioned about it, Michael admitted that he was bisexual, but he only had eyes for one person for years. Alan had cried a lot in private that night, realizing that he could have avoided this journey completely. But what was done could not be undone, and regardless Alan did enjoy being seen and treated as a woman these days. He wiped away the single tear, and felt the comfortable squeeze his father gave his arm. Everyone would think it was a tear of joy, but it really the last goodbye to Alan. Alanna took a deep breath and put on a smile as the wedding march started playing. She loved Michael with all of her heart, just as he loved her and was hers forever. She took the next step towards the future…
Diana Bialaska Hansen
2023-07-16 08:32:55 +0000 UTCCaptured military officer is transformed to become a wife to the enemy or slave of some sort
Harley Allen
2023-07-16 07:26:56 +0000 UTCStar College Football player has to get surgery after an injury on the field. When he goes into surgery he is brought into the wrong operating room. Because of the mixup he ends up receiving a fully functional vagina and ovarie transplant. In the following months he struggles with his gender and sexuality. At first trying to continue life as a man but with a vagina. Unfortunately because of the nature of the transplant, taking testosterone therapy will result in rejection of the transplanted vagina/ovaries which would lead to subsequent death. With estrogen running through his veins and no way to stop it, he will begin to look more feminine. Eventually his teammates turn on him and he is bullied off the Football team for becoming week and feminine looking. He befriends girls from the cheerleading teamn they witnessed the bullying and rejection from his old Football teamates. Even though he hooked up with some of the cheerleaders before his incident they felt petty for his situation and decide to bring him into there click. The cheerleaders slowly push him to except his fate, he was becoming a woman. After trials and tribulations of accepting his transition he eventually becomes a star cheerleader and ends up dating one of the guys on the basketball team. One day I would like to make this plot into a whole story, what do you all think?
TheVampire
2023-07-16 05:10:33 +0000 UTCA nightclub owner turned club dancer
Erica Rost
2023-07-16 05:00:19 +0000 UTC
